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Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 7 years ago
Darn!

I thought he was going to use that hairbrush in a "slightly" different direction...!

Cram it - Ram it - Rotate it!!

hells_bellehells_belleover 7 years ago
Good read but,

Might I highly suggest editing just a wee bit? Minor misspelling and typos can disrupt the flow of otherwise good writing.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
Typos

I only gave it 4 stars. It would've been 5 but the flow was interrupted too many times by typo and/or grammar errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Typos

You might want to get someone to edit these stories for you. The flow is completely stopped every five minutes because of a typo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yuck. You seem like a 15 years old writing her fantasy. Couldn't complete it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It doesn't feel good to get your clit hit 😕 seriously disrupted the pleasure.

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