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ScUZzy
I knowa lot of authors like to see just how stupid and dispicable they can make a decent person end up with the lowest scuz and make it seem ok.
They exremely rarely succeed, pyschobabble doesn't do it.
Even a weak little guy like you decided to molt Jake into would gain enough stength after a while to see clearly she is a disaster waiting to happen.
Shit
Your stories are shit.
What the fuck is wrong with you.
&√ Not sure why
I Agree you read the Story going in knowing how the Writer is going to do Things . Then get Pissed because he followed his or her Script. C'mon get with it or go away.
Please warn readers
I don't like cuck stories or RAAC stories. I'd really appreciate a warning. Shit is hazardous to my health. Slut gets no blame and poor Kevin dies.. Not fair. It wasn't Kevin's fault the dirty slut couldn't/wouldn't say FUCK YOU & FUCK OFF! For that he dies.. But wimpy loser hubby gets his damage slut back. 😕😕...
I have no problem qith reconciliation, but you have to write a believable one
There were no consequences, no shrink for her, nothing. He just simply took her back after some lame couple counseling sessions.
How did he get to trust in her again? Whata did she do to overcome her self esteem issues?
None of these is said. That what makes this story hard to swallow and hard to believe.
Sorry I didnt like because I'm not buying.
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