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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/30/04

tactile

splendidly picturesque!

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by Maria239402/21/04

in this one

your imagery is excellent, you invocaion of that **been there** feeling that makes a poem feel personal--I like that feeling :)

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by hippiedude06/22/04

I like the way

you brought just about all of my senses into play with this visual and tactile poem.

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by twelveoone03/23/11

as per usual,

well done, the whole poem plays off the title. only thing missing

third nipple, or a clown (inside joke) a 5

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