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by Maria239401/29/04

this is

just an excellent poem, insightful

my favorite lines---

suns are mothers
incestuous eons away

yeah, thats good :)

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by annaswirls01/30/04

2Rivers

my words always look like chicken scratch every time I read one of your poems. It is hard to comment. The first four lines are magic. The rest is the pedastal upon which magic stands.

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by duddle14602/05/07

understanding

Mothers enlighten our path to understanding.

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by tazz31705/11/12

FLAMES ARE HOT AND FEISTY

except when uncontrolled. TK U MLJ LV NV

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