great story till you got to this line.
"There began a marathon cock-sucking that would be to tedious to enjoy if I took the time to properly tell it."
if you had continued with your story instead of adding that line I would have given you a 5 but now its a 4.
the rest of the story was great, but don't shortchange us at the end because you are in a hurry to post the story.
I look forward to the next chapter in the story, hopefully it will be even better.
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A Friend Indeed
great story till you got to this line.
"There began a marathon cock-sucking that would be to tedious to enjoy if I took the time to properly tell it."
if you had continued with your story instead of adding that line I would have given you a 5 but now its a 4.
the rest of the story was great, but don't shortchange us at the end because you are in a hurry to post the story.
I look forward to the next chapter in the story, hopefully it will be even better.
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