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beautiful
It was a really beautiful story....proved it doesn't have to be all about sex to be interesting. Thank you so much for writing such a sweet romantic story. I hope to see more like that.
Touching
I love this site and get excited by the sex of it but this touched my heart and made me wish I were there and that were me it's rare but tihs got to my heart and I hope you've experienced that love, and maybe I will too one of these days.
My favourite author(ess?)
As ever my favourite writer comes up trumps. I hope I'm not the only UK admirer of V Rich's fertile imagination.
I loved this
I love a romantic story, this was wonderful and ethnic, too. Amazingly sweet and sensitive
Beautiful
A ray of sunshine in a dark world is always welcomed.
To light up a dark room with a smile is a gift, and you have that gift, My Lady
so sweet..................
so full of passion, life, sweetness.......... it was so easy to picture them together, holding one another, kissing, touching, loving.......... the tenderness that is lost in so many marriages she found with her "T". so very sweet
Wonderful
This is a beautiful story. It was excellent the way you removed the obstacle of the husband. A deliciously romantic tale.
Check your work
I thought your piece was pretty good, but make sure to check your work before you submit it. Errors such as tenses and spelling can tend to get confusing.
amazing
i absolutly adored this particular story, it make you want to beleive in true love and romance. and i'm definatly a hopeless romantic
Beautiful
I'm reading this right before Valentine's Day, and it is lovely. this truely shows that there can be plenty of romance without sex every minute.
Thank you
Tears of Forgotten Love
What a wonderful story, full of love and intrigue. My heart pounded when the two lovers finaly met. Such a wonderful display of true romance that is not seen any more and with this story comes the notion that romance is not dead or forgotten. Just hidden from the rest of the world but made known to the two that need it. Thank you
awesome!
Awwww that was so cute.
where the sex?????
what the heck no sex.......................
What the hell!
Excuse me but where the he'll is the rest of the story! I want to know where i cam find it and if it hasn't been written yet i do expect it to be!
Thank you,
Olivia!
P.s. If you couldn't already tell, i love it! I want more!
Haha
The last comment cracked me up. I loved this story it was beautiful and I do wish it had the loving slow ad beautiful love making to top it off though.
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