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by hippiedude06/22/04

Its hard

to imagine that I am the first to comment on this torrid piece. You do an excellent job of evoking some very vivid images and memories while provoking sustained contemplation of the story behind the story - nice depth - enough to float my boat!

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by hippiedude11/23/04

Its harder now

to imagine that I am the only one that took time to comment. The email reminded me of this poem so I had to come back and read it. It made it even harder - to understand that is. lol I think I've either used that phrase "primordial ooze" or I've seen it used in other poems. The whole creation motiff is pretty cool and especially when you place it in the context of sensuality. OR, Or I just can't resist a good blow job! I think the poem is great!

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