Progressing nicely although I have a bad feeling that you plan to include the parents (or at least the dad) in on the action. If that's true please don't, leave it a sweet sibling story and let the old guys have their own fun.
You're worried about the siblings expanding their incestuous relationship to include their parents, or as you wrote, "...at least the dad...", but I think the author set Mom up as the more adventurous of the two. The part, near the end of this chapter, where Andrea recalls watching her mother blow her father while on a road trip, that concludes with Mom making a show of consuming her husband's cum and then winking at her? Nothing shy or demure about that. Mom also boasted about getting fucked so hard she had trouble walking the next day. THAT's a mom who's not afraid to experiment.
I don't think it's been explained (or at least, not very clearly) exactly WHY this family vacation is occurring, just that the parents were insistent. I suppose it's possible the whole thing is a set up for some sexual revelation. We'll have to keep reading to find out, won't we?
I enjoy the style, and the dialog of this storyline. Hat's off to the author. You do an excellent job suspending our disbelief with enough dialog and description to pull us in to the story, but not so much that we get bored. My only serious critique would be the brevity of each chapter. Not even two pages? I know I'd prefer at least a second page, or even more, per chapter. Please keep up the great writing. I'm genuinely curious as to where this story leads.
Good Girl has led me to read older stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed them, and the comments. Stay wet !
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Anonymous01/05/16
Sexy Peter
Let Andrea see Peter in Hawaii minus his shirt and she can examine his muscular chest -- perhaps there is hair growing there, and a treasure trail and muscles she can touch, trace, taste? Sexy vacation!
Definitely knows what she wants and how to get it. I liked the concern Peter showed for Andrea. It sure helped the story line. Keep writing.
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Anonymous01/09/16
Always some stupid dad thing
Why the hell do you idiotic writers always have to add some dad/daughter shit to a BRO/SIS story? It's like an epidemic on here. Ruined the story for me
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Anonymous01/09/16
i like the idea of bro and sis and dad and sis and son and mom!! Great
English
Progressing nicely although I have a bad feeling that you plan to include the parents (or at least the dad) in on the action. If that's true please don't, leave it a sweet sibling story and let the old guys have their own fun.
4*
To the previous comment:
You're worried about the siblings expanding their incestuous relationship to include their parents, or as you wrote, "...at least the dad...", but I think the author set Mom up as the more adventurous of the two. The part, near the end of this chapter, where Andrea recalls watching her mother blow her father while on a road trip, that concludes with Mom making a show of consuming her husband's cum and then winking at her? Nothing shy or demure about that. Mom also boasted about getting fucked so hard she had trouble walking the next day. THAT's a mom who's not afraid to experiment.
I don't think it's been explained (or at least, not very clearly) exactly WHY this family vacation is occurring, just that the parents were insistent. I suppose it's possible the whole thing is a set up for some sexual revelation. We'll have to keep reading to find out, won't we?
I enjoy the style, and the dialog of this storyline. Hat's off to the author. You do an excellent job suspending our disbelief with enough dialog and description to pull us in to the story, but not so much that we get bored. My only serious critique would be the brevity of each chapter. Not even two pages? I know I'd prefer at least a second page, or even more, per chapter. Please keep up the great writing. I'm genuinely curious as to where this story leads.
Welcome back
I'm glad you came back. The story is hot. I love thinking of the many ways you can take this. Hope to see more soon.
Very glad you are back here
Good Girl has led me to read older stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed them, and the comments. Stay wet !
Sexy Peter
Let Andrea see Peter in Hawaii minus his shirt and she can examine his muscular chest -- perhaps there is hair growing there, and a treasure trail and muscles she can touch, trace, taste? Sexy vacation!
The sister
Definitely knows what she wants and how to get it. I liked the concern Peter showed for Andrea. It sure helped the story line. Keep writing.
Always some stupid dad thing
Why the hell do you idiotic writers always have to add some dad/daughter shit to a BRO/SIS story? It's like an epidemic on here. Ruined the story for me
i like the idea of bro and sis and dad and sis and son and mom!! Great
family sex is always hot. gave you a 5
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