Three Square Meals Ch. 06

5/5

really liking this tale... hope to read lots of adventures on the Invictus. Also, maybe he needs a couple more girls alongwith Alyssa to start a new race ...:P

I spy with my little eye a harem plan?

Would be almost a waste with that big new ship and the "quad" not to add Rachel and Calara. (also consider adding some exciting alien types)

Totally loving your style, keep them coming!

Thnx

Thanks for this chapter! Really curious about the extra space in the ship. *wink* *wink*

Pu-lease

Why do guys fuck up a story with lines like this -> "His blunt, broad head was deep in her uterus..."

It seems like this impossibility is just too tempting for the male mind to resist. Four balls, no problem - magic semen, ok fine - small chick effortlessly deep throats monster cock, I'm on board. But the cervix has basically a pin hole and dicks just do go in there regardless of how long they are. You might as well have him fuck her ear.

I gave you 5 five stars before this chapter but that stupidity knocked two off.

"But the cervix has basically a pin hole and dicks just do go in there regardless of how long they are. You might as well have him fuck her ear. "

Hah! thanks for the amusing imagery. :)

Yeah I've read this criticism before on comments for other stories and of course you're right (assuming you typod the above and meant "just DO'NT go in there".

There's an actual justifiable reason why this does make sense within the story, but I don't get to it for another 20+ chapters, so if I've lost you already, then my apologies!

If you really want to know, send me an email via the author contact page and I'll reveal a very mild spoiler (It's pretty obvious, you already allude to it in the previous sentence).

Regular 4 star so far

I've really enjoyed it, tad to much sex for my liking, but I cant complain as i'm still reading. Kept going with the promises of more and eagerly awaiting where this is going to go.
JC

Uterus Penetration

The reason to overlook this penis in uterus absurdity is because it's pretty obvious she isn't entirely human anymore and since he isn't human his ejaculate isn't the same.

With normal humans there are a couple problems with it. The cervix and prostaglandins. Yes the cervix can dilate enough to pass a baby thru it, but it's generally a slow and uncomfortable process requiring the right hormones to begin. Prostaglandins, found in seminal fluid, introduced into the uterus within just few minutes cause "nausea and vomiting, fever, diarrhea and cramping." Interestingly it is also prostaglandins which are used to initiate cervical dilation.

Descriptive genius

Enjoyed it immensely. Will we hear more about his mother? Can't wait to find out.