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by Anonymous

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by Missy1025601/05/16

5 and favorite story..both loving and erotic. Good job!

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by GaryArl01/13/16

You know your way around the English Language

I like the care and attention you give to your word choices, especially important in a short piece like this. You did a great job of giving the reader a ringside seat. Hot stuff. I noticed this was posted much more recently than your incest story. I hope you're back to stay.

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by caradoc196003/20/16

5 stars for your fabulous story, excellent phrasing and pace
and another 5 stars for the hard on it gave me!

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by electricblue6604/17/16

Hot and efficient. That's great writing, made me throb!

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