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by davebccanada08/04/11

I've decided...

... that "A Year of First Times" is well worth including in my favorites as is the author. The five chapters brought back so many memories of my own youth.

I like your style of writing. It seems concise but well thought out. It likely is a reflection of your own thought processes. I look forward to reading more of your works.

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by Anonymous06/11/13

Edit your fricking writing!

Not once did you actually put "Torrie's house" which would have been correct. Edit your fricking writing! It really pisses me off!

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