All Comments on 'Jane Goes to Scotland'

"brief ecstasy supplanted by the mundane once again" I hope this wise-cracking Jane eventually finds someone who not only briefly rocks her world, but joins with her on a plateau of compassion and sensuality. I love that Jane is young, smart, passionate, and searching.

Thanks!

Where were you when I went to Fort William?

And why on earth aren't you still writing?

I've just read this one again. Dayum, girl, you is smokin' hot!

I think I know that garage and must call for some French tongue! More please that was great

Nice details make it come alive for me.

"like a pornographic Halfords ad"

Ok, I stopped at this point, gave you a 5, and left this comment.

Too fucking funny.

Normally I enjoy a few days build up before the fucking happens.....but omg! this was def a hot quicky!