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waste of time
This belongs in some romance pulp fiction, out of place here.
loved it
Loved the writing style, she is a great character. Just wish we could find out where they go from here 😊
Hi Everyone
Thanks so much for the feedback so far! I appreciate all feedback, even if it's negative.
I just wanted to clarify that this story is complete in it's entirety and (unfortunately) for those who want it to continue this is the entire story! This story is not supposed to have much character development but I wrote this just to showcase my writing style. My other works will have significantly more depth. Thanks for taking out the time to read my work and I plan on submitting more here on Literotica!
Love to All,
MaggieWay
Not sure about this one
It seemed to be a story made up of sound bites. I like a sorry with a fuller developed plot and characters.
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