All Comments on 'Xeroxing My Zeppelins'

Refreshingly different. Well done.

I'm too old to be a college kid but you made this old guy hard and gasp. Well done. The hook with the copier was sly and teasing. Sort of a sweet sexy innocence coupled with frank sexuality. You seem to know what you would love and how to get it unabashedly. Look forward to more

I gotta say, another great one, Matt. A very nice role reversal. Usually it's the guy who walks in on the girl in a state of undress and gets turned on by it. And sure, there are other stories of a girl taking what she wants from an inexperienced guy, but they're all from the guy's perspective.

Sasha's delightfully perverted mind and Matthew's adorably shy uncertainty made for a beautiful pair. It was nice reading through Sasha's narration and thinking "well, she may not be real, but at least I'm not the only girl who thinks these things." XD

Now, to be fair, some criticism. It was a bit short and could've done with a bit more set-up. Sasha and Matthew are said to be best friends, and Sasha never noticed he was into her, but we don't have much in the way of a frame of reference for what their relationship was like before she walked in on him masturbating. The lack of description of the characters made it hard for me to actually imagine them. Matthew is mentioned to have black pubic hair and Sasha's breasts are described as "round and full," but that's the limitations of what they look like from what was described. However, from experience, the minimum size for a decent tittyfuck is a D-cup, but DD-cup or larger is needed for a comfortable and full one.

Your writing is a joy, Matt. Thanks for this awesome one! <3

@Cyberweasel, as always, your comments are amazing. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Although I have to admit, story Sasha is based on a real Sasha I know, so maybe she is real after all.

I do struggle with properly showing deep friendships, I think. I'm not patient enough for all the set-up required before the fun stuff. I like my stories short and sweet. Thank you for your feedback! It's always a delight. I admit, you're my favorite reader.

Awwww, Matt, you flatter me. >//////<

So then... How busty is real!Sasha? ;P

@Cyberweasel, I'd say she's a DD, and not a fan of bras, either.

Well, I'm not a fan of bras either, but I'm a 30AA, so... I can afford it. XD

ENCORE, ENCORE!