All Comments on 'Chicago Hotel Adventure Ch. 02'

Bravo! After reading the first few paragraphs I stopped and looked for Chapter 1 (I had not read it). Great story.

I hope there will be further chapters and that you are able to sustain the level of writing you've exhibited so far.

Great read! It has the same intensity of the first chapter and you can see the characters develop as the story progresses. It is rare and great to find a so well rounded erotic story. Hope to see a ch 03 in the future.

Nicely written, I especially like the way that you build up to the actual action as it were, setting the scene and actually developing some characters. This makes for a more believable and satisfying read, keep up the good work.

Keep up with the good work, I love it.

Great writing. Hope to see Ch 3 soon!

Parts 1 and 2, beautiful.

I think this was even better than the first chapter, it really is developing well - I sure hope these two have a happy ending!

Thanks for the great read.

Deb

f**king awesome, well wriiten yet still hard core. nicely done, going for chapter 3 now.

One (3) of those very rare occasions that one presses on with reading post relief. I am awed by your immense talent and hope the outlets are all there for you as you may wish.

Great balance between passion, emotion and story development. Plus, this chapter has one of the most intense sex scenes ever!

I find myself in conflict as I read this wonderful story! Part of me wants to soak up the tale of the relationship in full bloom that consumes both Wes and Sylvia and the other part of me is so HOT that I need relief!!! Very well done!!

Your stories are incredible. I only discovered this site this morning and Nostalgic Ramblings Ch 2. was the very first story I read. It blew my mind. I like this Chicago series too. :) Keep up the great work.

I'm an editor here, and I continually send other authors to look at your work, especially the Chicago series. I honestly haven't seen better erotic stories anywhere. Your musical details are spot-on, you paint the city beautifully, and your characters are exceptional.

You do a great job of pulling the reader into the story and making them think. Its really developing and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I want a Wes.

the best sex story i ever ever read anywhere on earth and moreover it isnt finished!!!

This is by far one of the best stories I have had the PLEASURE of reading! My boyfriend and I enjoy reading it aloud to one another and have a "simon says" sort of relationship with the characters. Thank you for your amazing story. . . please keep writing.

amazing. just amazing.

Liked how they came so close to getting caught!

I like reading about young lovers, maybe reminders of the past 😎

Jake

Tongue in asshole? Not reading anymore of this.

A great coherent tale. I love it 5 stars again. I have it marked in notes with ten flames & ten hearts. Just the kind of story I’ve been looking for.

Bill S.