All Comments on 'Gameshow Ch. 01'

Great start to the story, can't wait to read the next chapter....

Can't wait to read the next few chapters. There's something about these religious types being brought down a peg or two that always amuses me.

A good start, and a fairly original concept. Don't keep us waiting too long.

Hope this turns out to be as interesting as it started.

Looking forward to the story getting under way

Looking forward to the next chapters.

You've gotten my curiosity peaked as to how the story will continue. Looking forward to the next chapter/chapters.

what happens next??

This is great

I like the details. Very eye catching

Hot start. Please continue the story.

This is GREAT!

Wish I had thought of this, great idea!!

Awesome concept! Looking forward to the game...

I think that the story has merit and if half as good as the build up it should be well worth reading.

interesting premise but it went nowhere

We start with a well motivated and well-endowed young woman. This story could go literally anywhere.

Sorry I’ve got to play Devil’s Advocate here, it’s such a cheesy concept (British slang for ridiculously cliched) and in really really poor taste. It’s obvious that there’s going to be nudity, exhibitionism, voyeurism, sexual acts etc all intended to humiliate the good little church girl into doing something she’s probably going to end up enjoying.

Seriously though to add in a clause saying that she can’t withdraw from the competition at any stage AND that sexual forfeits will be carried out by force, it’s beyond ridiculous and clearly illegal. By stating that you’ve just informed the contestants that they may be raped as part of the program! When it would be just as easy to say that all activities will be filmed and aired at the discretion of the show’s editor and that the contestants may withdraw at any time but will automatically forfeit any money paid to them.

Given that she needs to do this for the money is enough to virtually guarantee that contestants stay on the program with the added benefit of making them culpable for choosing to proceed. In other words if they decide to stay and play they won’t have the excuse of ‘I was forced to do the forfeit’ so no absolution of guilt.

As for the appalling poor taste by targeting a devout church goer that’s just really fucked up. Like most people, I don’t like having other people’s religion forced on me. Religion isn’t my thing and I personally I think it may have caused more harm than good but neither would I humiliate or mock someone for their beliefs. As far as I’m concerned religion is just like sexuality in that it’s a personal choice and nobody else’s business.

I’m still planning on reading the story unless you prod my outrage button too hard. As it stands you’ve all ready pushed too much on the suspension of disbelief, if she thinks pubs and alcohol are evil then there’s not a chance that she would go ahead with the game. Following the logic she would be more likely to put her studies on hold instead of agreeing to participate in your rape gameshow.

Tess (UK)