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Excellent start
Great start to the story, can't wait to read the next chapter....
Gameshow And Tell
Can't wait to read the next few chapters. There's something about these religious types being brought down a peg or two that always amuses me.
Good start
A good start, and a fairly original concept. Don't keep us waiting too long.
got me interested
Hope this turns out to be as interesting as it started.
Good Start
Looking forward to the story getting under way
good story
Looking forward to the next chapters.
very interesting
You've gotten my curiosity peaked as to how the story will continue. Looking forward to the next chapter/chapters.
don't leave me hangin!
what happens next??
MORE!!!!!
This is great
I like the details. Very eye catching
Hot Start
Hot start. Please continue the story.
fantastic!
This is GREAT!
Fantastic Idea
Wish I had thought of this, great idea!!
awesome concept!
Awesome concept! Looking forward to the game...
Good Idea
I think that the story has merit and if half as good as the build up it should be well worth reading.
boaring
interesting premise but it went nowhere
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