All Comments on 'New Year's Surprise'

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beau6beau6over 8 years ago
Bring It!

I can see this story developing a bit more. Bring it! ;-)

jawolfe91051jawolfe91051over 8 years ago
Please MORE!!!

Wouldn't be a great story without continuing seeing what devilment they can get into.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago
More, more, more!

Absolutely!

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 8 years ago
More, please.

Hot and arousing . . . and we're left hanging. Would love more. Thanx for all your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where is the incest?

No incest

Just fuckbuddies

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Hope they get together down the road.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
babies

Mandy needs to keep fucking Eric for at least another 20 years. She also need to give birth to at least 16 babies by Eric.

ansdguyansdguyabout 8 years ago
Interesting premise

I would like to see where it goes. I wonder if the boy can keep his emotions in check.

mthomas63mthomas63about 8 years ago
Nice!

Actually, better than nice. It got my top rating. And, I would like to see some sequels, maybe some threesomes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great story cant wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More chapters!!!

Great story so far. We need more chapters!!! More, more, more!!

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 8 years ago
To be continued-I really hope so

very hot story just loved it

AnnaLinguistAnnaLinguistover 7 years ago
Awesome!

Nice little quickie. What a deal for him!!

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
Double AWESOME

Great first chapter. Hope you will add more chapters. So many ways to go

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Well...

I liked it a lot...but I guess since it's over a year old, we won't be seeing other chapters, which is kind of a drag. :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice story

For some reason i read Vanessas dialogue in Moms, from futurama, voice. Which made tge story creepy at some points. I enjoyed the story, just my exhausted imagination decided to mess with me. Good job on the story though. Sounds like a good benifits passage

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice yarn

This little story took me back to something similar I went through with my own mother and my boyfriend. Even though it didn't end well, it brought back fond memories of the good parts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More please

Definitely need more of this one if only to see what escapades Eric can get up to with Mandy and Vanessa

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 6 years ago
No incest, wrong category

Not what I expected, though I guess it can be considered a little taboo to have sex with both the mom and daughter.

Still I think it would disappoint people expecting incest, and that it should be in another category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Learn a few new words/phrases?

You're not a bad author at all, but I have noticed that every story has the male pushing into her tunnel and making a cone of her breasts "the better to suck them", I guess. Predictable isn't good. Surprise us once in a while, please!

levoyeur2levoyeur2over 5 years ago

Excellent story. I loved it. Keep on writing. It looks like I have a lot of high ranking stories of yours to read. Can’t wait.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

I loved the story and would love to see another chapter with the daughter and mother sharing him at the same time as well as each other. Gotta earn that incest tag somehow!

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
OMG

Every man's dream come. That was insanely hot.

RovingasianRovingasianabout 3 years ago

second chapter is absolutely necessary... he should move in!

NadiePreguntameNadiePreguntamealmost 3 years ago

Too hot to leave it end as it is now !!

cursrahcursrahover 2 years ago

more of this story please

JReadmoreJReadmoreabout 2 years ago

Just the situation I have always dreamed of! Great tale. I would love to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Trailer park trash with him fucking skank Vanessa

nyteramblernyterambleralmost 2 years ago

Yes more more lol what a deal he has hot daughter and hot milf mom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This one could be alot of fun if the writer doesn't crap out and stop writing.!!!

afosi2604afosi2604about 1 year ago

To be continued? Not up to us. The opportunity exists but the writer needs to decide if that's somewhere he wants to go.

IcemanQIcemanQ9 months ago

Holy moly. That is a hot story and I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation.

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