Unfortunately long paragraphs of detailed descriptions of sex don't necessarily make for an erotic story. A chore to finish reading it actually. Less words, more imagination required.
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Unfortunately long paragraphs of detailed descriptions of sex don't necessarily make for an erotic story. A chore to finish reading it actually. Less words, more imagination required.
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