All Comments on 'White Sluts' Club: Bride-to-Be!'

Love your stories! So talented and sexy!

it is some what of an interesting read but man at least keep it with in Reality, i mean the story could have been a few pages longer so as it would have taken the girls about 2 ..3 weeks to introduce the bride-to-be what exactly that do go on at that club.... when the girls took her to the club, for the first 2..3 nights the bride-to-be could have totally resisted and defied them and got up and walked out ...then as the girls continued to take her back to the club for another 6 ..7 nights her resistance could have started to become a little weaker as each night passed.. such as on the 4th night her curiosity could have taken a little a small bit of control and she just taken his cock out looked at it then walked away and each night from there on she could have been encouraged to take a tiny baby step forward until the night before her wedding night would have been the night for a full fledged black cock fucking and she walked away a 100% satisfied happy girl and went about marrying her hubby-to-be

this do not happen in reality just like that .. there is absolute no one who loves to get fucked with an extreme thick any more them i love it and i have never been to the point yet just to walk away from my lover just for the sole purpose thick cocks i have fucked

Two editors and still this piece has miss-used words and poor writing style. The far fetched nature of your readers request aside, how can Bill Cosby be guilty of anything if 50 Shades of Grey and women infatuated by this fantasy populate earth?

Not a very interesting story at all. 2 stars.

Most of my stories rate a solid >4.5 with a couple "hots"- I know how to write and I've been looking forever to collaborate and find editors to improve, but nothing.

No disrespect to the author (because creation is cool), but multiple Editors on this hard to read piece is sad and frustrating.

Love the story. I remember my first time, what a rush. xoxoxoxo Annette

What a poor excuse for friends this poor bride had.

Because I have. Stop reusing your own tropes!

I wonder what would happen if a white guy went into that club. I think I have an idea . . . .

I might have not have married 22 yrs ago if my girlfriends took me to a club like that also. Love your stories, you are amazing!

hope you'll have more entrants for the club!

RA

I really liked this story. The girls were very wise to take Naiomi to the club and introduce her to better lovers and bigger cocks. Now she will not just settle for less.

I've read a few of your stories and I've managed to keep my mouth shut about this, but I just can't take it anymore. Why do you insist on using so many dialogue tags? It's soooo distracting. Please just stick to "said" and "asked". And do a little research to learn when fancy tags are needed. One more thing; a lot of the time, dialogue tags aren't even necessary. We can tell who's talking by the context in the quotation marks. So keep that in mind if you don't like the idea of saying "said" all the time.

as always, your story is so hot. I wonder how i would have reacted if my friends had taken me to a club like that. deep down i wish they had

Interesting I hope her poor hubby didn't spend too much on the wedding that is off lol

it was john- he didn't marry the slut- she was so full of self loathing and had such low self esteem she would have failed as a wife- he will be better off without her because she will end up a disease infested crack whore- the only ones i would feel sorry for are her parents who lost thousands of dollars on a wedding and are still stuck with her

a disease infested crack whore didn't she? Oh yea you licked her clean for years before you realized you love eating cum!!! 5 for a good story!!

This was so hot - had me very interested. Am reading a book about this blonde milf - like me I guess - who is lured into the world of blk men - there goal to blk breed as many wht women as they can. the heroine is married and still around 30 - so still pretty - but being neglected a bit by her husband - as we all are at some time. the story - silly as it sounds - is that these blk guys are trying to breed out blue eyes and blondes by literally f*cking blondes into submission. initially she is hesitant but then submits and becomes a slut for blk cock. I seem to read it most nights :) as I said - sily story - but gets me so hot. like this story. thanks J xxx

I'd join today. am a lawyer too so ... :) thanks so much. I came so hard. k

Can't believe some of the comments. This is such a top story. I think some girls might "break" this easily - especially if they already thought along these lines. Found it very very hot.

Keep banging them out. (pun intended). As I have written many, many times before, you are my hero. Bullies taking wimps mom, or wife. High school bully coming back years later to take wimps wife, kids and, then, the wimp.

I climax to this every time - thank you :)

KYS

i reiterate, lololol.

Such a club would be great--your story was also great--don't stop

You need to follow up with a sequel where she dumps John after discovering she is pregnant with a black baby and goes on to have several more. Have her pull a few black trains both male and female among other things.

Thanks for writing and sharing this really hot story. I am sad its over and look forwards to reading the rest of the White Sluts Club series.

Danielle

Just for Argument sakes? ....What happens if She was going to marry.. A. ...A Gazillionaire.. B...Her one true love. C..A future United States President?.....Well She can now kiss it all BYE BYE....Because none of the above wants A BLACK COCK SLUT.......... See Ya

She is not getting married. But i do not lick woman's pussy but i sure want a 20 inch black cock. I am a black 66 yrs old and i know that i can handled a big black cock. Love this story

Wow are the white girls/ women really so easy? I wonder how come a certain QB still has 24 lawsuits and counting, couldn’t he just go to this club 😀

Been to a bunch of parties that turned in to Sex Parties. Even some was called "Eyes Wide Shut Parties" by the Black Men that were there watching me and other girls please them. Some times I was the ONLY white girl in the rooms with others being Black or Spanish girls. Mens all wanting to try or get some of me and leave there Load of Cum IN me. Some the womens there ate Pussy to and I did. It just got so Freaky at times but when we was Smoking up and Drinking it just got so Open to Anything. LOL

627. This was excellent, but too short. At the very least, we needed to know if she becane pregnant from all the loads she received. But more of her escapades ahd the group sexat later parties would have been delicious. In your mind , Jasmine, black cock must be a real fantasy. Would your hubby be pisseed or might he actually set you up with one? Don’t you wish?!!!

Well, too bad she did not marry John. Before she walks down the aisle, she gets a couple of loads in her ass and pussy. She licks both cocks clean. She walks down the aisle with the cum running down her stockings. They kiss after the ceremony. At the reception John reaches under the dress and finds the cum on her legs. On the first night of the honeymoon, she puts him in a cockcage and ties him to a chair. He gets to watch as 5 black guys take her over and over again. This happens several times over the honeymoon. Her new husband gets to clean her up with his tongue. You know what happens after they get back from the honeymoon.

She may have to ease him into it, but John would surely understand her craving for the mighty BBC. Often it comes from watching porn together, and eventually seeing a beautiful black cock. John would see and feel how much hornier she is from seeing it. He would then intentionally show her big black cock porn. Eventually he would understand her need to be blacked. It's just more intense and different sex than he could provide. I'm sure he would be a good husband and support her black cock cravings.

Such a great story! Wow.

awaiting the night my wife becomes a black cock slut. I sure as hell ain't stopping her.

Excellent! Ever day white women are discovering the joy of Black cock. Every day white men are discovering they can't compete with Black men. Every day more and more white people are surrendering to the Superior Black race AS THEY SHOULD.

Lol @ the previous commenter. Are you a psycho or a Russian troll stirring up racial propaganda.

The only thing I didn't like is the overbearing slut character like Becka. Such an annoying person.

Great story! TY. Pictured myself as Naomi the whole time! I've been dressing for 10 years now and black guys love us gurls too! They treat us just the same! lol.

Chapter 2- When Naomi and John get married, she doesn't realize that one of Jamal's sperm had connected with one of Naomi's eggs when he fucked her the night before the wedding. John and Naomi have a great honeymoon for two weeks. They had fucked often so Naomi was not too concerned when she missed her period and began getting morning sickness. Naomi went to her doctor who conducted a test which showed that Naomi was pregnant with twins. She thought about the fucking from Jamal but convinced herself that her husband John had impregnated her. Eight months and two weeks later, Naomi went into labor and John drove her to the hospital. John was allowed to be in the delivery room with Naomi when her doctor brought out the first baby and to his surprise, and the horror on Naomi's face and shocked look on John's face, the first baby was a mostly black baby boy. Then the second baby was delivered, and this baby was a mostly black girl. John left the hospital in a rage and filed for divorce the next day. Naomi and Jamal got married a few weeks later and fucked often. Naomi got pregnant eight more times and delivered four more mostly black baby boys and four more mostly black baby girls.

It's all fine and dandy, but it should all come out so that the white men can utilize option don't want you back after going black. Then some more realism having Naomi getting pregnant and the possible fathers of course run off.