White Sluts' Club: Bride-to-Be!

You are the best

Love your stories! So talented and sexy!

Reality

it is some what of an interesting read but man at least keep it with in Reality, i mean the story could have been a few pages longer so as it would have taken the girls about 2 ..3 weeks to introduce the bride-to-be what exactly that do go on at that club.... when the girls took her to the club, for the first 2..3 nights the bride-to-be could have totally resisted and defied them and got up and walked out ...then as the girls continued to take her back to the club for another 6 ..7 nights her resistance could have started to become a little weaker as each night passed.. such as on the 4th night her curiosity could have taken a little a small bit of control and she just taken his cock out looked at it then walked away and each night from there on she could have been encouraged to take a tiny baby step forward until the night before her wedding night would have been the night for a full fledged black cock fucking and she walked away a 100% satisfied happy girl and went about marrying her hubby-to-be

this do not happen in reality just like that .. there is absolute no one who loves to get fucked with an extreme thick any more them i love it and i have never been to the point yet just to walk away from my lover just for the sole purpose thick cocks i have fucked

No No No

Two editors and still this piece has miss-used words and poor writing style. The far fetched nature of your readers request aside, how can Bill Cosby be guilty of anything if 50 Shades of Grey and women infatuated by this fantasy populate earth?

Not a very interesting story at all. 2 stars.

How?

Most of my stories rate a solid >4.5 with a couple "hots"- I know how to write and I've been looking forever to collaborate and find editors to improve, but nothing.

No disrespect to the author (because creation is cool), but multiple Editors on this hard to read piece is sad and frustrating.

First time is the charm

Love the story. I remember my first time, what a rush. xoxoxoxo Annette

Glad I don't have friends like that.

What a poor excuse for friends this poor bride had.

I feel like I've read this story ten times already

Because I have. Stop reusing your own tropes!

Great Club!

I wonder what would happen if a white guy went into that club. I think I have an idea . . . .

Another great one

I might have not have married 22 yrs ago if my girlfriends took me to a club like that also. Love your stories, you are amazing!

enjoyed it

hope you'll have more entrants for the club!

RA

Good story

I really liked this story. The girls were very wise to take Naiomi to the club and introduce her to better lovers and bigger cocks. Now she will not just settle for less.

I've read a few of your stories and I've managed to keep my mouth shut about this, but I just can't take it anymore. Why do you insist on using so many dialogue tags? It's soooo distracting. Please just stick to "said" and "asked". And do a little research to learn when fancy tags are needed. One more thing; a lot of the time, dialogue tags aren't even necessary. We can tell who's talking by the context in the quotation marks. So keep that in mind if you don't like the idea of saying "said" all the time.

as always, your story is so hot. I wonder how i would have reacted if my friends had taken me to a club like that. deep down i wish they had

Good story

Interesting I hope her poor hubby didn't spend too much on the wedding that is off lol

someone got lucky

it was john- he didn't marry the slut- she was so full of self loathing and had such low self esteem she would have failed as a wife- he will be better off without her because she will end up a disease infested crack whore- the only ones i would feel sorry for are her parents who lost thousands of dollars on a wedding and are still stuck with her

HEY ANNONT you asshole. Your wife ended up being

a disease infested crack whore didn't she? Oh yea you licked her clean for years before you realized you love eating cum!!! 5 for a good story!!

Awesome

This was so hot - had me very interested. Am reading a book about this blonde milf - like me I guess - who is lured into the world of blk men - there goal to blk breed as many wht women as they can. the heroine is married and still around 30 - so still pretty - but being neglected a bit by her husband - as we all are at some time. the story - silly as it sounds - is that these blk guys are trying to breed out blue eyes and blondes by literally f*cking blondes into submission. initially she is hesitant but then submits and becomes a slut for blk cock. I seem to read it most nights :) as I said - sily story - but gets me so hot. like this story. thanks J xxx

White Sluts club

I'd join today. am a lawyer too so ... :) thanks so much. I came so hard. k

Feedback

Can't believe some of the comments. This is such a top story. I think some girls might "break" this easily - especially if they already thought along these lines. Found it very very hot.

Luv

Keep banging them out. (pun intended). As I have written many, many times before, you are my hero. Bullies taking wimps mom, or wife. High school bully coming back years later to take wimps wife, kids and, then, the wimp.

Wow

I climax to this every time - thank you :)