Three Square Meals Ch. 07

Pleased with the story

When I first read chapter 1 wasn't to sure about how I felt about the story; now 7 chapters in I eagerly await each new installment. Keep up the excellent work!

Glad to hear you're enjoying reading the story!

It's fun to read the feedback, thanks for taking the time to comment.

Chapter 08 has been submitted, I'm currently working on 9-11.

That's some cargo ship.

I can't help thinking the Admiral has something in store for his old friend. I don't like to bring this up, butt I am. Please since I'm not feeding Alyssa, could I have a little more sci fi. There are a lot of places in this story for more details the space port, the fight and rescue of Calara. I think we are about to find out, but I'm certain there will be some quad action first and secondly. Well keep at it I know this must be time consuming.

Like your stories build up

Just wish for a bit more gristle on the bone. A bit more plot and world building. Tons of sex is great, and you've done a great just building up the characters...but I find myself really enjoying the little pieces in between.

Like your story but...

Don't know if this is addressed in later chapters but the fact Alyssa isn't telling John she can read his mind is starting to feel like too much of a deception.

"Alyssa isn't telling John she can read his mind is starting to feel like too much of a deception."

I can't really answer that without giving away spoilers. ;-)
Thank you for the comment, though. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

small error

Hi Tefler,

Edit log person here. You refer to Port Hercules as Port Cerberus at the end of the chapter.

Nice catch, thanks! I'll go back and edit this chapter when I've finished chapter 34 and correct it then.

Movie???

The Description here is fabulous. Sometimes it's like I am watching, not just reading.