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by Anonymous

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by RapidResponder01/07/16

Get some assistance

I stopped reading when you used "discussed" instead of "disgusted" for the SECOND time!! Please employ the help of an editor/proofreader. Your writing skills leave much to be desired. **

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by de_gr01/07/16

Online checkers...

Thank you rapidResponder for the very kind way that you brought this error to my attention.
I used a couple online checkers but none of them found the error you found.
Yes I could use a real editor.

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by Mbgdallas01/08/16

Not swinging.

What is described in this story is NOT swinging. Do not be confused by that.

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by gordo1201/08/16

This is NOT swinging

Swinging is by mutual agreement and respect and this situation isn't. It would be a better non consent reluctance story.

As someone else pointed out there are numerous errors in the language. Obviously english is not your first language. While an editor is there to help I think the entire story needs a re-write and they don't do that.

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by de_gr01/08/16

I think its swinging

This is a story I have heard. How much of it is true I dont know. The sex scenes are certainly made up. The idea behind the story is very clear though. He wanted the swinging lifestyle and she tried to follow along but it didn't work out.
Ideally both partners in a swinging couple should enjoy the lifestyle but I doubt this is always the case. I am sure that in many couples one of the two just suffers through the whole experience.

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by Anonymous01/08/16

5

Evidence of your lack of english skill makes it more erotic and believable.

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by Anonymous01/13/16

Thanks

Your English is far better than any other language I know. So, don't let the nit-pickers bother you. Your plot was creative and I enjoyed your story.

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by de_gr01/13/16

Thanks to everyone for commenting.

The truth is that the story needed an editor.
I fixed the disgusting mistakes that were pointed to me in the comments.
I am grateful to everyone that took the time to read and comment the story.

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by Anonymous08/18/16

Swinging and orgies are not one in the same

Write about things you know, things you've done.

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