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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/11/04

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want your face
daylight glow
screen blue
yellow sun

no joke

still type the secret code
498A

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by duddle14612/10/06

Oddly appealing.

Living for the difference of night - sounds of music. Daybreak - a cruel joke.

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by tazz31704/28/12

DAYS IN MOST MONTHS

do the night times matter, TK U MLJ LV NV

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