All Comments on 'Timing'

The mental side of sexuality

A fantastic scientific and detached look at sexuality and intimacy. While the character development looks forced at times, the physical descriptions are without par.

I found this story by chance. It is one of the most erotic pieces I have seen on this site. I am male, but it should appeal to both males and females.

I found this one after a dizzying trek through the author's epic "It's My Party". The same attention to detail and insights into human behavior are on display here, in a more abbreviated form.

Unfortunately, so is his apparently compulsive need to engage in sometimes illuminating, but occasionally numbing levels of exposition, that tell you considerably more about the characters than you need to know to follow the plot.

Well worth the read, in spite of that minor quibble.

Your stories have a weird vocabulary.

Dear Hammingbyrd7 , i have one small pet peeve when I read your stories, they are wonderfully immersive and hence when I read this it jerks me out of the tale. This is your use of the word pubic as a noun. the noun form of pubic is pubis. you can also replace pubic by pubic region as pubic is an adjective. in this story too "Lin pressed her hand against Stacey's pubic, feeling" should have been "Lin pressed her hand against Stacey's pubis/public region, feeling" I still rate this 5 stars !