All Comments on 'Sensual Mornings'

If I could right a scene like that for one of my stories, I'd quit my day job.

Very, very, very erotic.

A very erotic story but it should have been edited better. There were several hyphenated words where the hyphen was omitted and you had punctuation and spelling errors (Probably typos) You repeatedly referred to "bloodred silk sheets". One "bloodred" would have been enough, and after that, just "sheets". Use of adjectives was too heavy. Coming from me, that is strange because I am a heavy user of modifiers myself, but you overdid it, even by my standards and you repeated the same ones too often. I enjoyed the story but the things I mention were distracting.