All Comments on 'Experimental Peach'

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perksperksabout 20 years ago
I gave you a five

just for private sector.

your passion is the cheesiest, pants. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oooo, luscious...

Just like this erotic peach.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh yes....

I have a weakness for such wordplay and you blow me away here. Did I miss a challenge? Many of the poems I have read today are tatalizing me with fascinating word sound play. This is one of the best...

jim :)

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
nailed it

Great flow as smooth and wet as any fruit cocktail.

I wish the wife was up, I feel like getting sticky.

trendyredheadtrendyredheadalmost 20 years ago
mmmmmm

vivid, juicy, succulent, sweet...

these are the poems i like to eat! :)

nicely done!

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