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White Wives Black Lovers

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by Anonymous

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by chytown01/12/16

Repeat**

I have read this story line so many times, It's old hat!! ZZZZZZZZZ Sorry!

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by kjohns200101/12/16

Drop the cheating slut and move on story...and a good one!!!!!!

I enjoyed the story and think that it shows one of the best ways to deal with a cheating slut if you can't bring yourself to just kill her cheating ass and her lover. The husband in this story was smart enough to get her to leave the house so he could file for abandonment. I liked that the family was not portrayed as taking her side and making the husband the villain. I know real life breakups seldom go this way, but it was nice not to have to endure reading about the husband having to deal with injustice from everyone else as well as what his cheating slut of a wife did to him.

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by impo_6101/12/16

To the point...

This story is a flash one, but to the point...4*

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by Whackdoodle01/12/16

Most states are no fault divorces

And it won't matter why he left her penniless, just that he slandered her reputation, cut off their shared income while still married and defrauded her of shared income.

End result, Sarah would be enjoying her black lovers AND her idiot husbands money because he was such a fucking moron that the judge levied huge ass fines for his attempt to defraud his wife.

I'm all for having the nice guy win but the legal system doesn't care.

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by Mbgdallas01/12/16

Stupid!

One of the worst and most stupid stories I have ever read. He moved out and abandoned her. Where does he get off thinking that she abandoned him. Stupid.

Lodging in to her face book page and posting and changing her password? Childish at best. All she had to do was request a lost password and then login and delete everything. This author is stupid if he doesn't know that.

Stealing the money. Fraud. He would get taken to the cleaners over that.

Changing her car tag and cancelling the insurance. Obviously he must have been on the title so if there was an accident he would have ended up liable for what he did.

Just plane stupid and childish. Not to talk with her. He obviously never loved her so he is the one totally at fault here.

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by blackrandl195801/12/16

I really must ask a question.

What purpose was served by throwing in the racial element? Would the cheating somehow have been better if it had been Hispanic wives, Asian lovers? How was the plot advanced by "White" and "Black?" The answer that springs to mind is that by adding the racial element, the author somehow thought the wife's behavior was more despicable. Why else wasn't the website just called "Cheating Wives?"

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by Lickideesplit01/12/16

Not at all satisfying

Agree with BlackRandl ... GotBacon seems to think there are two (or more) types of cheating ... Bad Cheating and Terrible Cheating. Terrible Cheating involves sub-humans (not like 'US!')

This would have been a very unsatisfying read WITHOUT the gratuitous and idiotic racial aspect! Sweetie is a (near-)total unknown. She is at least 35 years old and blonde! That's it! We are left with a few empty protestations of loving her (until! ...) then we are left with an Evil Bitch getting (Hubby's perspective of) her 'just dues!' Those 'dues' are not influenced by any legal 'meddling!' Yeah, that's going to happen (but only in HubbyFantasyLandia!)

LW is (or should be) about the effects of a wife's adventurous exploits on her development, Hubby's development, and their marital relationship. This offering falls far short of addressing most of that. It is just a fantasy rant about an unfortunate bad decision (at best! Given Hubby's behavior, Sweetie MIGHT have had more cause to seek a better life than we are getting from this report from GetBacon! An unfortunately large amount of this tale is first-person narration of Hubby's feelings and actions!

2*

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by Lickideesplit01/12/16

Addendum to earlier comment

Lest my own position on the actions in this (hopefully fictional) account be misunderstood ...

I think a divorce would clearly be an appropriate resolution of: a) Sweetie's betrayal of her vows; b) her failure to communicate to Hubby her lack of satisfaction with the state of their marriage; c) her willingness to be influenced by women who were unconcerned with her marital issues and who were relatively unimportant in her life!
But to cut off all communication with the mother of your son (regardless of his age), and wife for decades, is just plain childish! Trying to ruin her financial staus, to which she is legally presumed to have contributed (equally with Hubby) for those decades, is selfish and, worse, attempted robbery!

So ultimately, Sweetie is a stupid slut and Hubby is an unmitigated asshole!

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by Nexttimeround01/12/16

Somebody

asked why the black-white aspect...?

Presumably that's because that's what's going on out there. Poor husbands. I really feel for them. How common is this? I wonder -- far too common for comfort. In response to the other posters, yes it would be a more of an insult if it was a black lover, as it shows a complete estrangement from even the race you belong to on the part of the wife. She "goes black" so subsequently, as a white male, you simply aren't in her frame any more whatever she protests about her love.

As for his behaviour, and indeed hers. It's a commonplace in these tales that the wife tries to reach the husband who has disappeared a hundred times but he refuses to speak to her. What would he say if they did talk?

Given that about half the stories on Literotica are all about how certain white males are only too happy to watch their wives get fucked by other men -- and often black ones at that -- it must be confusing for women as to whether their hubby is of the acquiescent compliant cuckold variety or of the BTB kick them out school of thought. They only get to know when they can't do anything about it! Just now I read a story here written by a female where she got divorced because she wouldn't satisfy her hubby's desire for her to fuck other men! It must indeed be confusing for women....

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by gordo1201/12/16

Pretty Basic

Although the author has written some good stories this one seemed to be rather deficient. Just a summation of cliches!

@BlackRandl1958
I have to say you throw the racial card (black female-white male) into every story you write so why would you question this story? I love your writing so don't take this negatively.

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by Overthefalls01/12/16

Didn't like this one.

Too many mistakes. I understand that this is fiction, but the legal issues alone ruined it. It made me laugh when he filed for divorce under abandonment and claimed to have the ticket. Which means he knows where she is located. End of the abandonment argument. And just because he took all the money doesn't mean she didn't get half of it back right away. Any lawyer worth his salt takes her case, goes to a Judge and the Judge orders him to restore the accounts. Same way with stripping the house and cancelling the car stuff. He would have had to restore it all. That's the way the law works in this Country. Even for a flight of fictional fantasy, your story was both implausible and unbelievable. Not good. 1 star.

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by Pappy701/12/16

Pretty good read.

I can see some of the elements in this story that appear confusing. I agree with BlackRandl that the specter the "dreaded huge black cock" seems to be a favorite plot line in LW. But in this case I think that, as was said before, the use of white wives and black lovers was a ploy to actually show just how far off the reservation the wife had gone. Hubby was the ultimate white bread and wife was fair and blond so the use of the black lovers just showed how much she actually came to disregard her husband and all that he stood for. Maybe so. Or maybe it was just an actualizing of the writers worst fear. Don't know, don't care. Hubby's actions aren't paramilitary or mafia connected actions, just someone who is devastated by what his supposed soulmate did to him and their marriage. Doesn't matter how attractive the idea of cheating is it was the wife's or husband's duty to resist at all costs. No one ever said that when you got married you suddenly went blind or your sensitivities dulled, you just took a vow to not respond to outside stimulus in an unseemly manner.

Again, not bad. Thanks for sharing your story and for eliciting such entertaining comments. I like reading them as much as the stories sometimes. Gave you a 5 because I wanted to, so there.

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by blackrandl195801/13/16

@Overthefalls

Easy to answer. I’m a black girl, married to a white guy, one of three I ever dated. I write what I know. At that, 10 out of 40 stories I’ve posted have one or more persons of color. I thinks that’s a fair representation. None of them exploit racial stereotypes. It’s a fair question. I’m not offended. This story uses the stereotype, not a black character. That’s the difference.

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by AnnetteBishop01/13/16

I like it, well done

It has nothing to do with race, your man did the right thing. Sharing is cool, cheating calls the divorce lawyer. Good story. xoxoxox Annette

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by christmas_ape01/13/16

no heat.

dry procedural: i left a comment.

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by Drbeamer333301/14/16

Thanks for the offering.

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by sbrooks10303/21/16

Marriage

Wasn't she invited to her son's wedding?

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by Susanlynn05/24/16

Why here?

The question is, why is this story even here on Literotica ? There's absolutely nothing erotic about it unless you count some guy's cum on wife's wedding rings. Whoop de doo. Sounds like something from Dear Abby. Try again, because basically, this sucks.

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by Afetishlova12/02/16

Pointless

What was the point? It wasn't erotic or hot in any way. We didn't really get to know either character so we have no reason to be invested. I was not angry on behalf of the husband or hateful towards the wife, if that's what you were going for. What were you trying to accomplish here? This is more like a sad excerpt from a self help book. The writing structure was fine, but the characters were flat and it seemed pointless.

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