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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/02/04

taste

i'll take the milk and sugar
poured over fresh fallen snow
scooped with long fingers
defrosted in my mouth

blind
i must close my eyes
to read your words

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by perks02/02/04

meerschaum

is the only thing that seemed out of place to me. It's entirely esoteric, so not easily recognizable to lots. I personally had to look it up, thus my opinion of such. Delicious poem anyway.

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by jthserra02/03/04

Something about

your poetry jabs me (in a good way). It's like I am reading something, but something else is actually on the page. You have an off beat word play that I have not been able to get to work for me. I'd copy you but can't figure out how. Nice stuff here...

jim :)

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by sandspike02/04/04

Toby was right !!!!

I should of been a cowboy. Loved it.

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