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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOOOOVED THIS PART WAS A GREAT TOUCHING START TO WHAT I HOPE TO READ MORE OF SOON JUST BY FAR ONE OF THE MOST WELL TOLD STORIES OUT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!
very good
i love interracial love stories where the black lady is a lady keep writing
GREAT STORY
Beautifl descriptions and wonderful love story!!! Will share it with friends.
Smokin'
Wow this was gooooood! I like your character development, images. And just the right mix of sex and romance.
Dinner With A Mint
Can you scream,"DAMN?" This is good, I can not wait to read more.
Rushed, but...
...I loved the idea. I love how they find each other after all those years--and I love the name you chose for her. Just add more details: how Raechel looks (we know about her ample bust and slim waist, but that's it), how Myles looks (we know about him being blonde), etc. Don't rush the story, as probably 2 pages would have been perfect. Gave it 5 for the idea of it and how sweet it was to read. :)
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