Great story! Good beginning but then it felt rushed... I felt the dinner scene was understated as well as the description of the bedroom.
The sex seem rushed and a bit unrealistic... no foreplay
Very good submission for your first one! I hope to read more.chapters
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Anonymous01/16/16
Sexy story
I thought it was perfect. Great idea on the plot too. You should add magic to it though, such as a self controlled dildo. Or maybe a class?
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great but rushed
Great story! Good beginning but then it felt rushed... I felt the dinner scene was understated as well as the description of the bedroom.
The sex seem rushed and a bit unrealistic... no foreplay
Very good submission for your first one! I hope to read more.chapters
Sexy story
I thought it was perfect. Great idea on the plot too. You should add magic to it though, such as a self controlled dildo. Or maybe a class?
Either way this made me squirt huge.
really good
Plot is a bit rushed but its good
good begining
Loved it would like to read more
Work in some magic and this could be pretty fun.
Did Chloe's tits get bigger on the way back to the room? ;)
Anyway this could be really fun with some weird porny magic powers and elaborate sex challenges instead of like... midterms and stuff.
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