All Comments on 'Prayer to The Goddess of Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
decietful

"I" before "E"; except after "C".

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Several...

typos distract from an otherwise good poem. You might want to edit and repost. Spellcheck flickering, generic, and anon's less than polite observation on deceitful.

jim :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Aphrodite's fire

A better poem than it's mark suggests ... and in length alone stands out. Love Fire safety requires either keeping a distance, or donning protective emotion/attitudes. And full insulation only loneliness. But past the youth fires, which can flicker life long, we all want a sexual loving romance ..for life. Desire: Aphrodites Fire. The old trick requires a bare foot walk. Best wishes. steve UK

MagnetronMagnetronabout 10 years ago

Multiple spelling errors VS flowing content from a unique perspective.

Worthy of 4 stars.

Giving you 5 to help make up for the previous lousy ratings.

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