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decietful
"I" before "E"; except after "C".
Several...
typos distract from an otherwise good poem. You might want to edit and repost. Spellcheck flickering, generic, and anon's less than polite observation on deceitful.
jim :)
Aphrodite's fire
A better poem than it's mark suggests ... and in length alone stands out. Love Fire safety requires either keeping a distance, or donning protective emotion/attitudes. And full insulation only loneliness. But past the youth fires, which can flicker life long, we all want a sexual loving romance ..for life. Desire: Aphrodites Fire. The old trick requires a bare foot walk. Best wishes. steve UK
Multiple spelling errors VS flowing content from a unique perspective.
Worthy of 4 stars.
Giving you 5 to help make up for the previous lousy ratings.
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