by skywriter62
Looking for more. I would like to be captured by one or more of the hunters.
another excellent chapter... despite my loving it.. the action in the Hunt... wasn't much of a hunt...:P
Thanks for the story, I loved it. I do think you could work on things like character descriptions. You could even go into detail about other things, describing a t-girls veiny cock hardening to full mast in vivid detail is a great for hightening anticipation.
A t-girl story on this site called "Cleaning More than the Garage" does this to perfection.
Loved the story and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Your fan numbers may be few in mumber but trust me its a great relief and pleasure of mine to be able to read stories that appeal to our desires. Keep up the good work and i selfishly hope for many more stories from you haha.
I do appreciate all of you taking time. I do think about being even more descriptive but I don't want to mire down in too much like I don't often use measurements and stuff. Personally, I rather give general details and leave something to your imagination. But I will experiment with detail descriptions in the next parts. Thanks again for the advice!
When I see Arabian beauty , i was expecting the typical Arabian woman with hairy black body. hairy legs and uni-brow. that will do the justice for introducing Middle eastern beauty. Also Love is important factor in sex so you can have love between these two even though its role reversal and domination submission thing. Keep writing
its a wonderful series.
thanks for this
this chapter was great. please continue and write more stories like this one
Just got an email from yet another anonymous person telling me "Erasing the negative comment doesn't make the story any better." I do not erase comments. I never had before so why start now? But if you are going to post a negative comment then at least provide information as to why you don't like the story not just "this sucks."
Another great story, I check back daily for more, ignore the haters your fans love your work and can't wait for more!!
You have FAR more than 20 fans. Given the response, comments, ratings, number of people who have favorited this story, etc I would guess that your fans number in the hundreds. Keep going, lots of people love this genre. For those who don't, why do you keep reading it?
Absolutely love it and it couldn't be better, ignore all the negative comments skywriter, this story is one of the best
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This is such a great saga!! I can only imagine what it would feel like to be prey. Not sure if I would run or not.
Absolutely fantastic stories. Please keep it coming in this genre. You have far more fans than you know!
Your story telling and descriptions are wonderful! Keep up the good work Skywriter!
Amazing story!!!! Would love to hear more about what happens to Paul! And the lucky guy in the tree!!! Would also love to hear more stories from the hunt!!! Please write more!!!!