by CJT
Love, lust, caring, concern, slapstick, and guffaws! Almost worth the wait but don't make us wait that long again.
Amazing as always. More typo's than usual.. (usually there is none!) I love this story..keep up the amazingly great work of art.
This is my favorite story, and I check religiously daily for updates. Just in time for my birthday, Happy birthday to me! Again, thank you.
this is what I need to read a great story please don't make it take so long for a nother ch one of the best
I love it when the wolf comes out to play. So needed to ease the tension of Nora's 1st day.
I would swear you were watching me and my Sir to write this scene.
Perfect!
And like Alex, I could never go back to vanilla.
I love the story overall but you've written Nora like she's 5 or 6. Now you're saying she's 9? She's around 60lbs and 4'6" tall. She likely wouldn't be in a booster seat in the car and certainly people wouldn't bend down to speak to her.
Love this story so far, but as someone already mentioned Nora being in 4th grade is way off. That would make her 9 or 10, much older than you've portrayed her. It initially says shes 6 so she'd be in kindergarten or 1st grade depending on her birthday.