The first part just showed how determined Tyler was from the start and actually highlighted the romance brewing between them. His Romeo talk and respecting her fathers wish is somewhat unexpected of a person in his position (insert the usual jock image here), but it goes to show that he’s got some brain as well as brawn.
WTF is it with their choice of foot wear? He rumbles of her golden converse but at the same time wears Jordans to a suit with a tie? Looking like that they sure as hell are made for each other :) Good thing Benjamin took care of that little problem.
Daisy just can’t help herself worrying about every little bit, she does trust Tyler but at the same time doubts everything when it comes to their joint future. Might be a bit annoying at time though. Her admitting she was his since they were children melted my heart nonetheless.
The whole blindfold thing was getting on my nerves quite a bit, probably because I enjoy watching the food I eat, so the paparazzi catching them was a bit of a sadistic satisfaction I got out of it.
And then comes the end that now keeps me in suspense as to what his real plan is. He has some greater plan that involves (obviously) scaring the shit out of Daisy or fake some blockbuster stuff, but to what end I can only think. I just hope it goes well and doesn't involve anyone of them getting hurt.
Gave it a 5* for the romance parts alone and looking forward to the next instalment, hopefully soon!
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Anonymous01/24/16
great story
Keep up the good work, i love how you are building up the momentum.
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Anonymous04/23/16
Update
Please update soon I love your story so far please keep going thank u
English
Great but the end has me worried
The first part just showed how determined Tyler was from the start and actually highlighted the romance brewing between them. His Romeo talk and respecting her fathers wish is somewhat unexpected of a person in his position (insert the usual jock image here), but it goes to show that he’s got some brain as well as brawn.
WTF is it with their choice of foot wear? He rumbles of her golden converse but at the same time wears Jordans to a suit with a tie? Looking like that they sure as hell are made for each other :) Good thing Benjamin took care of that little problem.
Daisy just can’t help herself worrying about every little bit, she does trust Tyler but at the same time doubts everything when it comes to their joint future. Might be a bit annoying at time though. Her admitting she was his since they were children melted my heart nonetheless.
The whole blindfold thing was getting on my nerves quite a bit, probably because I enjoy watching the food I eat, so the paparazzi catching them was a bit of a sadistic satisfaction I got out of it.
And then comes the end that now keeps me in suspense as to what his real plan is. He has some greater plan that involves (obviously) scaring the shit out of Daisy or fake some blockbuster stuff, but to what end I can only think. I just hope it goes well and doesn't involve anyone of them getting hurt.
Gave it a 5* for the romance parts alone and looking forward to the next instalment, hopefully soon!
great story
Keep up the good work, i love how you are building up the momentum.
Update
Please update soon I love your story so far please keep going thank u
eagerly awaiting more
When ever you update. Ill be happy to read.
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