The Road to Hell

Just long enough to

have enough details for a fine story.

Thanks for posting this tale

Short but sweet.

Good one. Thanks qhml.

MGTOW

With the growing popularity of the MGTOW/Red Pill movement I'm genuinely surprised that the loving wives section doesn't have more stories with characters taking the red pill and moving on to self improvement and just sport fucking chicks or doing friends with benefits. Also more stories where the hypergamous wife ends up a childless lonely cat lady.

"I'm genuinely surprised"

Why? Several of those morons submitted nearly incomprehensible drivel, but the majority are totally illiterate - just read their comments FFS.

The site has plenty of shitposting, but at least it's mostly confined to this cat....

MGTOW

"Men Going Their Own Way (MGTOW) has completed its devolution from a sensible philosophy of masculinity into a cult for lonely virgins. MGTOW has become a lonely hearts’ club for the refuse of the male species. Not only are most Virgins Going Their Own Way personally repellent losers, their “philosophy” is completely wrongheaded."

Rob Fedder

Thanks***

For the read.

nicely done

just enough information to see who she really is. the impact her behaviour has on those around her. and that she really and truly doesn't get it.

thanks for the glimpse into what remains of the sad little life she has created for herself.

Now that was a storybook

ending if I ever read one. The evil witch got what she deserved.

MGTOW

That's already what this category is though. A bunch of pathetic, red pill ranting, men's rights losers getting together to jerk each other off about how awful all women are and how much better off they are without them. Oh sure, the stories present them finding a second wife, but the second wife is almost always just a completely blank slate who might as well be a blow up doll. The majority of this category, and especially the anons, are just sitting around looking to suck each other off about how awesome they are and how disgusting and icky girls are.

Which fits my belief that all anon cowards on here are just closet cases who have to funnel all their self hatred and guilt about how bad they want to suck cock into rage and hate and desires for violence against women.

Good Story Q

Not your best but keep writing..Thanks

"That's already what this category is"

Fear and insecurity cause groups to form, so what's the problem with one forming in LW? And many of the talented authors either 1) don't post in LW anymore, 2) don't post at all, or 3) post shit like this story.

If you have a suggestion for a better category for scared and lonely insecure guys to gather in, please speak up, because the group isn't going to magically disappear.

It says anonymous but it's carvohi. Oh well..

it wasn't "Boston to Birmingham" now was it? One of my favorites is "A Comfortable Pair of Shoes". I don't know where this came from. You should have put it back in the cellar and let it mellow a little longer; it read like a bottle of juvenile wine.

Honest, I have a bunch of stories outlined and ready to be written, but for some reason I'm afraid they'd probably end up something like this. Gosh, how could you?

Can you tell I'm disappointed?

Just the same I gave you a five. Why? Well for one thing it's you, I want to give you the encouragement you need to get your 'mo-jo' back. For another; even when you write tripe like this it's fifty times better than everything else out there. And last; well it was kind of an original theme, what having the main character be the serpent bitch who lured a loyal wife down the primrose lane.

Now go back and write something we all can sink our teeth into. I've got confidence in you. I know you can do it. Who knows? Maybe we'll stir something up, maybe see another Matt Moreau or Troubadour.

Jedd Clampett

Oh Look

FLC is having another hissy fit. LMFAO!!!!

I DO NOT UNDERSTAND!

Why is problem a lot of "insecure men?" (55% of the wives cheat nowdays!) who got negative experience from cheating girlfriends, fianceés or wives like stories about successful men who get rid of cheating girlfriends, cheating fianceés and cheating wives and find first (after cheating girlfriends or fianceés) second or third wives in the 45% of the wife population?
May only the creampieating cuckold fantasy get space ??????????

You Do Not Understand alot of shit Duna

Basically, closet cucks get off on the shame and denial, not the actual thing - which is the only way they can since no actual woman would who get other men would ever be with a closet case anyway.

I Do Not Understand why a goat-humping idiot would even ask such an inane question, the logic is plain as the billy-goat shit smeared on your tiny cock.

The market demand.

Why is problem a lot people loke similar stories? THERE IS MARKET DEMAND.
There are 40% of the husbands who did not cheat, do not cheat and will not cheat on their wives, (they generaly are honest to their girlfriend before breaking up) and there are 45% wives who did not cheat, do not cheat and will not cheat on their husbands. According to the mathematic statistic 50% of the faithful husbands do meet cheater wives (it may one part of them are clueless...) I do not convict those spouses who start extramarital affair after their spouses cheated first!
However there are MARKET DEMAND for CHEATING AND RECOVER stories!
In the XIXth CENTURY the MARKET DEMAND was for Anna Karenina, Mdme Bovary now there are newer MARKET DEMAND for such stories!

A lot of you got it

And a lot of you didn't. I've lived my life by the principle you should never take yourself too seriously. One of the writers I've corresponded with in the past told me that if you had to explain your writing, it wasn't very good writing. A Typical Ending, The Road To Hell, and a few more things I'm writing right now between the 'serious stuff' I'm doing, are just me poking fun at myself and stereotypes of the genre. A Typical Poker Night Story will be next, and I'll have a few more things along those lines before the year is out. So, don't over analyze anything I write. If you like it, you like it. If you don't, you don't. But thanks for reading regardless. I hope the new year is good for all of you, if you can avoid the cheating wives, their slutty compatriots, your backstabbing best friends, the bitchy mother-in-law, the manipulative and meddling people who know what is best for you, the competitive coworkers,and the archenemies you didn't even know you had who are hellbent on destroying you world.

All the best,

Q

Easy duna

There is a market for such stories. In other categories.

That's like walking into a hardware store and bellowing at the cashier you don't understand why they don't sell milk and eggs, THERE IS MARKET DEMAND FOR MILK AND EGGS!!! The fault isn't with the store, it's with you for coming to the wrong place to buy what you were looking for.

There are sites out there for pedophiles and ignorant, inbred bestiality lovers like you Duna. Why don't you try one of those sites, while the bitter, lonely, closeted virgins just admit what they want and jerk off to gay sex or cuckolding and just be happy and quiet about it.

Thanks for the offering.

.......is paved with good intentions,

Maybe not an original situation but a fantastically original perspective. Hearty congratulations on another masterpiece.

Brutal!

A brutal little story. Thanks....

To the point

Simple and sweet. There is no limit to the self delusion of human beings, and I have no doubt there are people out there that are like this woman. Also, there is no limit to denseness when it comes to critics. The clientele of Literotica is not exactly up there with the the National Academy of Sciences, so you have to tolerate the various idiots. Another nice compact story- it is hard to do both very long involved plots as well as short stories, and you do an admirable job of it.

Great Story

Loved the "honour" board in the locker room - But wouldn't want to be putting my name on it :)

Welcome back

Some people cannot take responsibility for their own actions. It's good to see that you have a handle on this.

Liked it

its a counter balance. just too many arrogant, self-serving bitches who gets everything their way stories in this category. This is very rare compared to that kind.

idiotic

fluff for closet types

Nicely done...

to a turn. Whee, a self-burning bitch!

One could almost feel sorry for her, if one was a saint. Otherwise, keep her away from me and mine.

It didn't mean anything?

Yes! It did!

So what does she do now?

Because you know she's not going to learn from her mistakes.

Follow - up

On Marge what becomes of her does she get her act together. Does she have any more Meetings with Todd.

It's Only Sex. It Doesn't Mean Anything.

The quality of sex women are capable of is how men remember or define women. So when a woman says, "It was only sex. It didn't mean anything.", what they are really saying is I don't mean anything. I am totally worthless. I have no value as a woman. I do not deserve a good husband or family.

Funny, I enjoyed reading this tale.

although........

The only reason he would not get a lot of money from an 'alienation of affection' suit in North Carolina would be that the defendants had little to no money.

The judges there come down hard on that.
Six and seven figure judgements hard.

An unpaid judgement is a bad debt on a credit report, and bankruptcy does not make it go away for this kind of judgement (it is considered a willful and malicious act).

Ouch and LOL!

5*

Short but sweet ..

Thank you

Thoughts

OK, I know this is just a little flash story, and I'm probably preaching to the choir, but I always get a kick out of these cheating wives who don't think that they are doing anything wrong, but would go into a murderous rage if the husbands cheated!