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Brava
...Brava...keep it up(so to speak). You have a great voice and the long tease is fabulous...I really want to hear whats next. Again....Brava
gypsywitch had a good time
Hope you enjoy Angela's work. More will come soon.
One question !!
The story is fine, not great but okay I guess...
BUT WHY ?????????????????
Did the writer chose it to be read by someone with a lisp ??
Hard to get turned on by someone who sounds like they would spit all over you !!!
Raspy
There was a rasp in connection with the voice. A little to much intorduction.
SLEEPING IN CONFESSION!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS AINT A CHURCH CONFESSION OR MARRIAGE COUNSILING I WANT, " TO THE POINT SMUT " YOUD BE BETTER OFF TELLING A FANTASY DREAM WHILE MASTERBATING!!!!
Still enjoying the ride
Keep true to the story. I get the point your making even if others think its all about the sex and missed it completely. These things take time. Enjoy the journey.
Supurb
I love the writing style...reminds me of my own. The subject matter is handled very well...erotic, teasing, making the reader "beg" for more. Your style is wonderful. Keep up the good work...oh and BTW...I'm female...so yes, the stories are read by females.
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