The Morrisons Ch. 01

nice

Hot Story !

Short and to the point

Thanks for a lovely story. i really like this one as it contains all the essentials to build a great serial. It was a bit short but compensated with being to the point and dripping sweet of mutual sibling love.

Of course a 5 and hoping for more really soon!

not that impressed

First of all you need an editor if you are going to continue with this story. Not sure who is speaking? Is it Ryan, is it Stacy I'm not sure and it is confusing. Not a very Original title as there is already a series with this name. The only reason why you would have the last name is because the mom gets involved.

"Borrowed" ? Title?

Anonymous got it right; you need to have an editor. You might want to use a different title as well. RecHiker has a long running series titled The Morrisons. Your story is nothing like it as far as content goes. Do your research.

Maybe should have done my research on the title as I wasn't aware of another story with the same title so my apologies on that

Ok

I like the story wished you would have make it longer before gettin them together I'll keep y eyes out for more jjust make it a lil bit longer

Story Got Better As It Went!

Very Interesting Story! Father Leaves! Mom Overworked! Sister Turns 18! Incest Is Best! Mom Coming Up Stairs! Next Chapter Please! Edit Important, But Without GREAT Plot What Have You Got?

Can it be longer? Cant wait for Ch. 02

I enjoyed the story. Hope Ch 2 is longer.

Title??

I was going to comment on the title, but I see Fat_Dad already mentioned it, so will just say I think you have a winner here with a little work, but please try not to keep the same title as RecHiker (he has over 25 chapters of 12 pages each with a fantastic ongoing epic!!)(just let us know the change so we can find the next chapter)

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AMAZZINNGGGG

please write more!

Waiting !!!!!!!

come on write chapter number 2, You are in my favorites so get writing

great start

now keep it going please