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Good tale
Well written, good character development, definitely 5*. Why didn't she call him?
To patrick1937
It isn't bad enough we have Christian fundamentalist assholes on facebook and twitter and scumming up the tv? In case you need reminding, These are sex stories, strokers, fuck stories, not a bloody bible class. Take your moralising, sky daddy bullshit to Pat robertson or some other senile CF idiot. It would be good to have at least one site free of assholes like you.
Patrick your going to hell as well
You can't proclaim one sin worse than another patrick! If you are here reading this literature than you are just as blasphemous as the language. So grow up, enjoy the storytelling. This author works very hard to not use as much gratuitous language as some others, his art is very real. Read his stories for the content and the depth of the love that brings the true heat in the sex. Don't pick at language or don't read the stories at all, idiot.
Sad but sweet story with that ending!
Fate...whether you believe in it or not....has a habit of stepping and mixing things up!
Blasphemy (or Hypocrisy is Alive and Well!)
How ironic that someone concerned with "blasphemous language" is reading erotica to get off! The "fornication" and "adultery" are no big deal, of course, but that blasphemy stuff is OUTRAGEOUS!
Shouldn't you be in church or maybe confession rather than here on Literotica?
@patrick1937 what the heck are you talking about?
Dumb comment, very dumb comment. Jesus and God do not need you to defend their good names. I understand why believers may visit this site though I am unsure why I do. It is interesting to watch the backlash from atheists which makes as little sense as your comment.
Oh, are you willing to cast the first stone?
loved it
5*, there are a couple other stories I have read here on "Literotica" that are of a similar nature, I think they call them May December romances, but I could be wrong. When a spouse passes away, I can testify to the feeling of total loss, it is bad. Perhaps some of your commenters have not been there yet, not that I recommend it to anyone. It is a good story.
A Great Story
Loved it. I've only just discovered komrad1156, and I'm mightily impressed by the quality of the writing. I don't give a good damn about so-called blasphemy, but then as there is neither a heaven nor a hell, I won't be going to either.
It's always a great pleasure to see a good story develop, to watch a relationship grow into something hot and loving. So much better than some of the mindless stroke stories that infest Literotica. Thank you - I will be reading many more of your stories.
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