Well first your comment about it being longer is simply not true. It was however a nice read. I for one prefer longer chapters, I like my chapters to be at least 3 pages long but that's me. The ratings do go up much higher when the chapters are longer. I do have an account on here just didn't sign into it, so i am not some random anon just snipping at you I am however trying to help you not run you down.
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Anonymous01/14/16
re: the story
Can't please everyone, because I'm the opposite of this person. My ratings go down the longer the story.
This is a fucking great story. Please continue! 5 stars
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Anonymous02/12/16
MORE PLEASE
What more do I need to say, more please
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Anonymous02/25/16
MORE!
Like Aunt Julie said, "I don't want this to end!"
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Anonymous05/24/16
Please this has to continue
Man its been for ever since I've read a story on here that continues to pull me in and this one does.... continue please
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Anonymous06/02/16
Don't stop!
I feel this one was shorter than part one. Maybe even a bit rushed this time around, But regardless, it was amazing! Marvelous story-telling, I was pulled in all the way. Please do consider including a part 3!
English
Great start!
I eagerly await the next chapter. Thanks for sharing with us.
"This part of the story is much longer than the first."
It is? Funny, because Chapter 1 was broken into two pages but this is only one.
Hotter than the first? Yeah an argument could be made for that if for no other reason then you could further explore their relationship,
Less Words/More Action!
Aunt Julie Makes Adam Comfortable With His Body! He Understands His #1 Priority, Pleasing Aunt Julie And Vice Versa! Really Enjoy It!
Very Credible
Well written ...
the story
Well first your comment about it being longer is simply not true. It was however a nice read. I for one prefer longer chapters, I like my chapters to be at least 3 pages long but that's me. The ratings do go up much higher when the chapters are longer. I do have an account on here just didn't sign into it, so i am not some random anon just snipping at you I am however trying to help you not run you down.
re: the story
Can't please everyone, because I'm the opposite of this person. My ratings go down the longer the story.
I'm with Julie
I don't want it to end either - more please!
More
Lots more please.
More...
This is a fucking great story. Please continue! 5 stars
MORE PLEASE
What more do I need to say, more please
MORE!
Like Aunt Julie said, "I don't want this to end!"
Please this has to continue
Man its been for ever since I've read a story on here that continues to pull me in and this one does.... continue please
Don't stop!
I feel this one was shorter than part one. Maybe even a bit rushed this time around, But regardless, it was amazing! Marvelous story-telling, I was pulled in all the way. Please do consider including a part 3!
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