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by lesliejones01/16/16

Still charming

I feel you have definitely added some dimension to your last effort, which was a fine first story. This one has a nice flow and you have developed the characters more. I still admire your skill at riding the line between getting too clinical and properly using the erotic force which stories on this site aspire to achieve.

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by Reindeer5801/16/16

Nice tale

You have a voice that's developing nicely. 5 stars from me. You don't need one but I'd be more than happy to edit for you.

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VERY GOOD!

Especially for your second effort. This is the first story I've read in this category, usually I read and write Loving Wives and Taboo stories. I think you have won another reader to The Romance Category. Once again, You have a fine story and I wish you luck.

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by China_Miss01/19/16

Thank you!

Yes, Wow! Thank you all for your kind comments. It's a pity I can't get the editors of Women's magazines to accept my stories! They're not as racy as these two stories, of course, but I can nearly paper the room with rejection slips! I have a couple more almost ready. Hope you like them, too.

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by Sampkyang10/02/16

WOW!

This is sooo good! Keep writing China-Miss! Thank You!

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