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A Mist Of Whispers Ch. 01

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by jthserra02/15/04

An interesting beginning

to the story... I will have to read on. I liked the style, and aside from a couple of typos found the execution flawless. I like the development of characters, but look forward to seeing more.

Overall,

Excellent story.

jim :)

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by kingquib12/21/05

reminds me

I think your story is leading somewhere good, better than most of what's on Literotica. It reminds me of a story I wrote, which also opens up in a Sanitarium. Sanitariums are small worlds for horror writers.

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