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Hot stuff
A very hot series and an imagination well used. Thanks D
Interesting
While this was a great story - for me it lost it's edge the moment he touched his sister-in-law. There was no thought on his end of how this could damage the sisters relationship...did he think about what happens when Lauren all together pulls away after what happens sinks in? If he really loves his wife - those thoughts would have gone through his mind. Let's not forget that Lauren has just as much evidence as he does - don't forget there is always a trail with e-mail. All pointing into him forcing her into something vs protecting her. All little sister has to do is show her evidence. Don't you think the lawyer won't track down the evidence? Not to mention his inability to keep his promise and erase the files. If it's on his hard drive she will find it....
If you do continue the series - please have him forget something he left on his tablet so Lauren can now bribe him.
Great Finish!
All 4 Chapters Are Well-Written With Great Description And Dialogue! Thanks!
Really well done, excellent
Excellent story. The author will understand this comment. After our email I decided since the day was almost over to read some of your stories. I am certainly glad that I have done so. Great writing, great storyline, very pleasing result - obviously you left the story open for a continuation - love family sex. Xoxoxoxo Annette
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