Granted the author claims his two stories are NOT related, I would counter that they are fraternal twins (with one White and one Black sperm donor.). It is still, like the earlier Seduction by Dolphin, very HOT, but the more appropriate category was that of the earlier submission!
@ANON 'not terrible' - There are several languages in common use in South Africa, English being one of those. However, if (as is likely) the story is set there, social mixing between the races has been much less common than in Europe or The Americas!
Great seduction story, but you let it get cut short
...once Mike has gotten Tammy to orgasm a couple of times on his baby-maker, it was time to raise the stakes and have him take the condom off. She starts to protest a little, but the relentless stimulation forces her to orgasm again, forgetting all about the condom. When Mike fills Tammy with his seed, the whole experience becomes even more intense and intimate.
by
Anonymous01/17/16
My problem is that the husband is an unbelievable idiot
The biggest idiot in the history of Lit. Hard to like anything about a story when you make you lead character dumber than a stump. The sex was pathetic. 1 star.
by
Anonymous01/17/16
Perfect, if you have the sexual mentality of a moron.
Keep your day job, when you finally get one.
by
Anonymous01/17/16
You made the husband a chuck.
So you wrote a story , this marriage is over. The husband ask for it. The writer wrote it. Big Dickie friend screws wife while husband watches. A poorly writin story real trash.
by
Anonymous01/17/16
loved it
Good wank bank material
by
Anonymous01/18/16
His test worked, he can't trust his scumbag friend and his so called loving wife is a pig. He should of walked in on them towards the end before they finished and smashed the friend with anything he could grab and then tell the slut to start packing. She could go live with the friend if she can't be alone with a guy and not control herself. She now broke the ice and will know she can get away with it so he needs to end it now
by
Anonymous01/18/16
Fantastic LW story She is the true example of a LW@
Dear annony should know his wife was the same way!! She was a pig and a slut and all the guys loved her, and so did you dear annony! You loved cleaning her out every day and night! Great LW story gave it a 5
I wrote the first The Seduction of my Wife 12 years ago. I sat chatting to friends one night about how the story I wrote 12 years ago got over a million reads and still rates around 85%
Then we decided to do an experiment.
1. Write the same story, just different names and places
2. Throw in a black stud
3. Warn everyone beforehand exactly what they can expect to read in the story.
The results were very interesting.
1. The warning opening paragraph made the story absolutely irresitable to the Morality Brigade. They absolutely HAD to read it so they can spit their sanctimonious poison.
2. The black stud triggered off the racist: "That fucking nigger needs his nuts shot off and his black cock shoved up his ass." and "Giant black cock, yada, yada, yada." as was to be expected.
3. "no sane man is going to let some lowlife black asshole fuck his wife. sorry!" Assholefuck? Didn't even read the story.
4. And then there's this:
1*
01/18/16 By: Anonymous
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT MORON VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON! REPORT THE TRANNY BITCH'S RANTS, PEOPLE!!! IT JUST TAKES 1 SECOND!
Asylum material to say the least.
The experiment was a great success and well worth the effort
To the guys who had positive things to say and favorited the story, as always a huge thanks. Much appreciated.
Now we can bury it. (Although I see another million reads over the next few years.) ;-)
I'm not sure about 'scary', Dolphin, but it's certainly fascinating. And you have selected a somewhat biased sample of human psyches for your experiment. I doubt that Literotica's Loving Wife story readers represent the population at large. (But an interesting group, nonetheless. Well worthy of your study.)
I do suspect that what you have called the Morality Brigade has become more rabid in recent years. When you go back through the archives to early 2000s LW stories, the comments seemed to me to be much more accepting of a wife's extra-marital activities. In recent years, the Brigade has come out in force.
So whether it was the racial element and the attraction of the warning at the beginning of the story, or whether it was a function of the increase in rabidity over time, it was an interesting experiment.
An interesting extension of your study would be to write it again, but from the viewpoint of a wife with an adulterous husband rather than a husband with an adulterous wife. The racial element could remain and the swimming pool scene stay much the same. Sadly, there isn't a Loving Husbands category so it would have to go somewhere else where it would miss the LW moralisers. (Just as they missed hunter_gatherer's 'Angela's Choice' because it was in Interracial.)
But it would be interesting anyhow. I enjoy your writing. Give it a try.
L
even if it was an experiment. The LW section has become a internet asylum for the crazies. Just when you think an anon comment can't get any lower someone trumps them.
Anyway I gave the story a 3* and only offer the criticism that you kept going from golden curls to reddish curls which are two distinctly different colours.
by
Anonymous01/18/16
How About
adding a little sequel to this one. Has definite possibilieties!!!
by
Anonymous01/19/16
when I see a dumb ass comment made by bonnietaylor2
I always give it a ONE STAR. I can't help it, automatic reflex. There is a reason she received the "Asshole of the Year 2015" award. Must be going for the same award this year.
Husband should have stepped, he wouldn't have stopped it but he would have ok'd what she was doing. I'm sure she would have let him use her mouth. The threesome would have relaxed (no secrets) and planned their next venture. Good story. xoxoxoxo Annette
Thanks for your comment. Please don't get me wrong! I was most certainly not taking a swipe at the LW readers at large. I find more than 90% of them to be great, objective and knowledgeable people. I was targeting the "invisible" people, the tiny minority who believe that the cloak of anonymity makes them all powerful. Remove that cloak and under that you will find virtually nothing - just a nobody whose only way of making himself count is to shout in the streets (fig of speech) hiding behind the invisibility afforded to them by the "Anonymous" option. Outside that they are nothing.
But they are perfectly harmless characters (besides the nuisance value) and they don't worry me at all. I am just fascinated by how their minds work and how and where it fits into the normal human psyche.
Thanks again. Will consider your suggestion of another story with a role reversal. It has potential. ;-)
Dankie. Byt vas. Daar is so een of twee Afrikaanse goodies in die pyplyn. :)
by
Anonymous01/20/16
@Anonymous below Dankie. Byt vas. Daar is so een of twee Afrikaanse goodies in die pyplyn. :)
😀
by
Anonymous03/04/16
Hhhhmmmmm...
Good story. However, I have run into this situation before where acquaintances would not keep their hands off my wife. She never any moves towards them. Ultimately they paid a price that cost them a good friend. Two of them gotten beaten down to the point of being in the hospital. Another lost his job at my company. Alcohol and a beautiful wife and drunk friends are not a good combination. I realize that your stories are fantasy, but mine are just horror. Anyway, good job on the story.
I like the voyeuristic aspect of the story. I love the idea of my wife sucking and fucking another cock, or two for that matter, but I would like to be present and participant. I have written a lot of stories about her with other men. In some of them I am involved, while others she is off on her own. She likes to read them and please herself. We also role-play where she has a "private" Latin masseuse that comes over and massages her all over before tasting and fucking her. I am the masseuse but we do a whole texting session and the idea is there, so it is real fun for us both. Good story.
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Anonymous05/22/16
Uitstekend!
Ek hou van jou stories. Jou skryfstyl is baie goed. Al die mense wat so kla moet vir ons verwysings gee na hulle eie stories. Die meeste is van die KK&K (Kak, kerm en kla). Hou so aan! Jy het my ondersteunining. Die storie oor Jonas was goed.
Its like you fucked her yourself oh wait you didn't.
So when did you get the chance to fuck your wife or did she have a head ache. hahahehe
`~*
by
Anonymous09/13/16
Afrikaanse skrywers.
Beteken dit julle mense is in Suid Afrika, meskien in Centurion?
Ons woon in Centurion en ek sal baie graag met iemand soos Mike wil kennis maak, verkieslik n blanke om mee te begin. Ek sal daarvan hou om te sien hoe hy my preutse en outydse vrou verlei en met so n groot piel leer waaroor seks eintlik gaan en haar daarmee n seks verslaafde slet kan maak. Kan julle my kontak op: theuns.coetzer@gmail.com miskien kan ek julle n storie of twee gee om hier te skryf.
by
Anonymous10/13/16
I just don't get this humiliation wimp fetish.
There should be some dead bodies in this story. Yawn.
by
Anonymous10/26/16
Myth
Not all blacks ha big dicks.In 01 the lover had a big dick, Know it gives interest interest to the story but it is not size it how you use what you've got. I wonder if her husband ever showed the video he shot, or did he just use it to wank himself off privately.
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Anonymous02/07/17
TOLD FROM THE FAGGOT'S POINT OF VIEW
Only faggots do this sort of thing and yet the writers here seem to think it happens all the time. I've been reading this shit now for a couple of months and I could never quite put my finger on what was off with these stories and then it hit me like a ton of bricks.
I always wondered about the writers (I'm convinced there only 3-4 of these guys) having the loving wife or girlfriend say something about it only being sex. For the longest time that pissed me off because it made no sense...and then it struck me why it doesn't make sense. Women are so different from men that it's said we're from different planets. Women are all about connecting on the emotional level so for woman to go all out for sex with some strange dick there would have to be a strong emotional connection with the person connected to that strange dick. So much so that she wouldn’t have the connection to the poor husband or boyfriend she has chosen to abandon. She simply would not make these hollow meaningless protestations of deep, unfailing love and devotion for the jilted husband or boyfriend these 3 writers find so compelling.
Bottom line is that the stories are written so obviously from a man's point of view that it makes the story completely unbelievable, just so much hogwash. Men do believe it could be "just sex" because men think with their dicks, the lower head rules the upper head. But women are all about the heart and without that engaged, there really isn't that strong a sex drive, not on the level these 4 writers try to convey. Now if she's transferred the love, then the story makes sense up to the point of all the i love and only you bullshit.
So please, continue to write this shit, just make sure you give the betrayed husband/boyfriend plenty of ammunition to go for the nuclear response when he burns the bitch and her bastard by having the caught slut say something like "yeah, his dick is bigger, he lasts longer, I get a complete meal when I swallow his load and I think I've developed a deeper love for him than I ever had with you...if I ever loved you at all'. Then just go for the all out assault letting the betrayed not be more than fair, to want to deeply hurt the woman I'll probably always love. I think you would have a deeper fan base from the btb crowd if you'd just turn the cuckolds loose to totally rampage that sluts life the way real American men would when faced with that kind of emasculation
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Anonymous02/15/17
took your advice and didn't read it
just went to the end and gave it a resounding ONE STAR
English
How erotic, not.
Giant black cock, yada, yada, yada. Please! At least write something hot, original or with interesting characters. You missed on all three.
Next?
Next? Divorce...1*
He wants her to cheat but is mad she did?
How many times does she have to say no? Why didn't he stop it?
Why did I read this crap?
Wow
I loved reading it hope there's more
I thought your wifes name was Jessie.
Did you two divorce after Dr Jason fucked her?
My wife
Not impressed with the ending but hot leading to it. Love for a guy like mike to fuck my wife.
Well spotted!
The two stories, however, are not related. Admin has added the Chap 2. :)
Not terrible for a non-native English writer.
I can't imagine how difficult it is to write in a foreign language. Good for you.
Not worth comments or stars
Neirher would any continuation
12 years?
12 years?
Virtually the same ...
Granted the author claims his two stories are NOT related, I would counter that they are fraternal twins (with one White and one Black sperm donor.). It is still, like the earlier Seduction by Dolphin, very HOT, but the more appropriate category was that of the earlier submission!
@ANON 'not terrible' - There are several languages in common use in South Africa, English being one of those. However, if (as is likely) the story is set there, social mixing between the races has been much less common than in Europe or The Americas!
4*. (five in Noncon & Reluct.)
Great seduction story, but you let it get cut short
...once Mike has gotten Tammy to orgasm a couple of times on his baby-maker, it was time to raise the stakes and have him take the condom off. She starts to protest a little, but the relentless stimulation forces her to orgasm again, forgetting all about the condom. When Mike fills Tammy with his seed, the whole experience becomes even more intense and intimate.
My problem is that the husband is an unbelievable idiot
The biggest idiot in the history of Lit. Hard to like anything about a story when you make you lead character dumber than a stump. The sex was pathetic. 1 star.
Perfect, if you have the sexual mentality of a moron.
Keep your day job, when you finally get one.
You made the husband a chuck.
So you wrote a story , this marriage is over. The husband ask for it. The writer wrote it. Big Dickie friend screws wife while husband watches. A poorly writin story real trash.
loved it
Good wank bank material
His test worked, he can't trust his scumbag friend and his so called loving wife is a pig. He should of walked in on them towards the end before they finished and smashed the friend with anything he could grab and then tell the slut to start packing. She could go live with the friend if she can't be alone with a guy and not control herself. She now broke the ice and will know she can get away with it so he needs to end it now
Fantastic LW story She is the true example of a LW@
Dear annony should know his wife was the same way!! She was a pig and a slut and all the guys loved her, and so did you dear annony! You loved cleaning her out every day and night! Great LW story gave it a 5
AUTHOR'S COMMENT
The human psyche is one scary animal.
I wrote the first The Seduction of my Wife 12 years ago. I sat chatting to friends one night about how the story I wrote 12 years ago got over a million reads and still rates around 85%
Then we decided to do an experiment.
1. Write the same story, just different names and places
2. Throw in a black stud
3. Warn everyone beforehand exactly what they can expect to read in the story.
The results were very interesting.
1. The warning opening paragraph made the story absolutely irresitable to the Morality Brigade. They absolutely HAD to read it so they can spit their sanctimonious poison.
2. The black stud triggered off the racist: "That fucking nigger needs his nuts shot off and his black cock shoved up his ass." and "Giant black cock, yada, yada, yada." as was to be expected.
3. "no sane man is going to let some lowlife black asshole fuck his wife. sorry!" Assholefuck? Didn't even read the story.
4. And then there's this:
1*
01/18/16 By: Anonymous
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT MORON VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON! REPORT THE TRANNY BITCH'S RANTS, PEOPLE!!! IT JUST TAKES 1 SECOND!
Asylum material to say the least.
The experiment was a great success and well worth the effort
To the guys who had positive things to say and favorited the story, as always a huge thanks. Much appreciated.
Now we can bury it. (Although I see another million reads over the next few years.) ;-)
Amazing story!!!!!!!!
Congrats!!!
re AUTHOR'S COMMENT
no need to read you shitty story. when there's a "Dear annony" comment, you know what it's all about. automatic 1*.
and when I see the asshole of LIT's dumbass comments I always give a 5!!!
So eat shit and die dear annony!
Re: "The human psyche is one scary animal."
I'm not sure about 'scary', Dolphin, but it's certainly fascinating. And you have selected a somewhat biased sample of human psyches for your experiment. I doubt that Literotica's Loving Wife story readers represent the population at large. (But an interesting group, nonetheless. Well worthy of your study.)
I do suspect that what you have called the Morality Brigade has become more rabid in recent years. When you go back through the archives to early 2000s LW stories, the comments seemed to me to be much more accepting of a wife's extra-marital activities. In recent years, the Brigade has come out in force.
So whether it was the racial element and the attraction of the warning at the beginning of the story, or whether it was a function of the increase in rabidity over time, it was an interesting experiment.
An interesting extension of your study would be to write it again, but from the viewpoint of a wife with an adulterous husband rather than a husband with an adulterous wife. The racial element could remain and the swimming pool scene stay much the same. Sadly, there isn't a Loving Husbands category so it would have to go somewhere else where it would miss the LW moralisers. (Just as they missed hunter_gatherer's 'Angela's Choice' because it was in Interracial.)
But it would be interesting anyhow. I enjoy your writing. Give it a try.
L
Nice to see you writing here again
even if it was an experiment. The LW section has become a internet asylum for the crazies. Just when you think an anon comment can't get any lower someone trumps them.
Anyway I gave the story a 3* and only offer the criticism that you kept going from golden curls to reddish curls which are two distinctly different colours.
How About
adding a little sequel to this one. Has definite possibilieties!!!
when I see a dumb ass comment made by bonnietaylor2
I always give it a ONE STAR. I can't help it, automatic reflex. There is a reason she received the "Asshole of the Year 2015" award. Must be going for the same award this year.
Great encounter
Husband should have stepped, he wouldn't have stopped it but he would have ok'd what she was doing. I'm sure she would have let him use her mouth. The threesome would have relaxed (no secrets) and planned their next venture. Good story. xoxoxoxo Annette
@ luedon
Thanks for your comment. Please don't get me wrong! I was most certainly not taking a swipe at the LW readers at large. I find more than 90% of them to be great, objective and knowledgeable people. I was targeting the "invisible" people, the tiny minority who believe that the cloak of anonymity makes them all powerful. Remove that cloak and under that you will find virtually nothing - just a nobody whose only way of making himself count is to shout in the streets (fig of speech) hiding behind the invisibility afforded to them by the "Anonymous" option. Outside that they are nothing.
But they are perfectly harmless characters (besides the nuisance value) and they don't worry me at all. I am just fascinated by how their minds work and how and where it fits into the normal human psyche.
Thanks again. Will consider your suggestion of another story with a role reversal. It has potential. ;-)
Nice one, missing your Afrikaans stories...
@Anonymous below
Dankie. Byt vas. Daar is so een of twee Afrikaanse goodies in die pyplyn. :)
@Anonymous below Dankie. Byt vas. Daar is so een of twee Afrikaanse goodies in die pyplyn. :)
😀
Hhhhmmmmm...
Good story. However, I have run into this situation before where acquaintances would not keep their hands off my wife. She never any moves towards them. Ultimately they paid a price that cost them a good friend. Two of them gotten beaten down to the point of being in the hospital. Another lost his job at my company. Alcohol and a beautiful wife and drunk friends are not a good combination. I realize that your stories are fantasy, but mine are just horror. Anyway, good job on the story.
Good Story
I like the voyeuristic aspect of the story. I love the idea of my wife sucking and fucking another cock, or two for that matter, but I would like to be present and participant. I have written a lot of stories about her with other men. In some of them I am involved, while others she is off on her own. She likes to read them and please herself. We also role-play where she has a "private" Latin masseuse that comes over and massages her all over before tasting and fucking her. I am the masseuse but we do a whole texting session and the idea is there, so it is real fun for us both. Good story.
Uitstekend!
Ek hou van jou stories. Jou skryfstyl is baie goed. Al die mense wat so kla moet vir ons verwysings gee na hulle eie stories. Die meeste is van die KK&K (Kak, kerm en kla). Hou so aan! Jy het my ondersteunining. Die storie oor Jonas was goed.
three feet away
Its like you fucked her yourself oh wait you didn't.
So when did you get the chance to fuck your wife or did she have a head ache. hahahehe
`~*
Afrikaanse skrywers.
Beteken dit julle mense is in Suid Afrika, meskien in Centurion?
Ons woon in Centurion en ek sal baie graag met iemand soos Mike wil kennis maak, verkieslik n blanke om mee te begin. Ek sal daarvan hou om te sien hoe hy my preutse en outydse vrou verlei en met so n groot piel leer waaroor seks eintlik gaan en haar daarmee n seks verslaafde slet kan maak. Kan julle my kontak op: theuns.coetzer@gmail.com miskien kan ek julle n storie of twee gee om hier te skryf.
I just don't get this humiliation wimp fetish.
There should be some dead bodies in this story. Yawn.
Myth
Not all blacks ha big dicks.In 01 the lover had a big dick, Know it gives interest interest to the story but it is not size it how you use what you've got. I wonder if her husband ever showed the video he shot, or did he just use it to wank himself off privately.
TOLD FROM THE FAGGOT'S POINT OF VIEW
Only faggots do this sort of thing and yet the writers here seem to think it happens all the time. I've been reading this shit now for a couple of months and I could never quite put my finger on what was off with these stories and then it hit me like a ton of bricks.
I always wondered about the writers (I'm convinced there only 3-4 of these guys) having the loving wife or girlfriend say something about it only being sex. For the longest time that pissed me off because it made no sense...and then it struck me why it doesn't make sense. Women are so different from men that it's said we're from different planets. Women are all about connecting on the emotional level so for woman to go all out for sex with some strange dick there would have to be a strong emotional connection with the person connected to that strange dick. So much so that she wouldn’t have the connection to the poor husband or boyfriend she has chosen to abandon. She simply would not make these hollow meaningless protestations of deep, unfailing love and devotion for the jilted husband or boyfriend these 3 writers find so compelling.
Bottom line is that the stories are written so obviously from a man's point of view that it makes the story completely unbelievable, just so much hogwash. Men do believe it could be "just sex" because men think with their dicks, the lower head rules the upper head. But women are all about the heart and without that engaged, there really isn't that strong a sex drive, not on the level these 4 writers try to convey. Now if she's transferred the love, then the story makes sense up to the point of all the i love and only you bullshit.
So please, continue to write this shit, just make sure you give the betrayed husband/boyfriend plenty of ammunition to go for the nuclear response when he burns the bitch and her bastard by having the caught slut say something like "yeah, his dick is bigger, he lasts longer, I get a complete meal when I swallow his load and I think I've developed a deeper love for him than I ever had with you...if I ever loved you at all'. Then just go for the all out assault letting the betrayed not be more than fair, to want to deeply hurt the woman I'll probably always love. I think you would have a deeper fan base from the btb crowd if you'd just turn the cuckolds loose to totally rampage that sluts life the way real American men would when faced with that kind of emasculation
took your advice and didn't read it
just went to the end and gave it a resounding ONE STAR
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