I really enjoyed the premise, and the reference to State Farm. I hope you continue this story and can see all three of the protagonists in bed together eventually. By the way, I have no idea what pizza joint you are referring to. There is no decent pizza place in the BN area. You need to go to either Urbana or Peoria to get a decent pizza in central Illinois!
and I have more interest shit on the paper dear annony than your commnets!!!!
GREAT story gave it a 5
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Anonymous01/19/16
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This story isn't anything! It iisn't incest. It isn't BDSM. And it isn't stand-alone. Are you going to make your next one Ch 2? For Pete's sake, get an editor!
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Great start for an interesting story.
I really enjoyed the premise, and the reference to State Farm. I hope you continue this story and can see all three of the protagonists in bed together eventually. By the way, I have no idea what pizza joint you are referring to. There is no decent pizza place in the BN area. You need to go to either Urbana or Peoria to get a decent pizza in central Illinois!
and I have more interest shit on the paper dear annony than your commnets!!!!
GREAT story gave it a 5
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This story isn't anything! It iisn't incest. It isn't BDSM. And it isn't stand-alone. Are you going to make your next one Ch 2? For Pete's sake, get an editor!
Great start!
Lots of directions this can go. Keep writing!
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