All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 011'

Liking this story a lot hope it keeps going along time yet.

I hope for many more chapters. Thanks!

Glad you're enjoying it. I submitted Chapter 12 a couple of days ago, so that should be up soon. Working on Chapter 13 atm.

I've tried to dial down the repetitive sex and add more backstory and character development to the later chapters, let me know what you think.

Where you put this.

Calara kissed him fondly and nodded agreeably. They dressed quickly and turned to check on Sparks one last time before they left, the pale young girl was still sleeping soundly.

That should have been Alyssa Kissing them as they was going to see Calara to eat soon.

Very good story.

Well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

Thanks for picking up the Calara/Alyssa mistake, hope it wasn't too jarring to the story. I've updated my master document.

Glad to hear you're enjoying it.

So now you have a virgin. Make it so. I like John's possessivness of Sparks, gentile. Gun fights, trading, other races, the Invictive, and their purpose, mind reading, you have some story brewing here. Nice to see ch12.

Thanks for the comment, made me laugh. :)

JC

Alyssa didn't climax with john this time.

Also will all the girls be able to read John's mind and work in sync as a single unit to make his life constant paradise?

Interesting that she learned how to shoot like that. Hope she gets to use that skill at some point. Would she be able to adjust for multiple crosswinds that go in different directions and/or speeds?

Dreamy and capable women are every man's desire. Can John's life get any better?

I am so enjoying your story every bit as much if not more the second time around. Thank you. Dawn

He's going around doing little missions to add people to his crew. Very entertaining.

Calara kissed him fondly and nodded agreeably.

Wrong name here

Shooting around walls like that wouldn't actually work unless you could get 1000+ mph wind. Otherwise great story.

Tefler has the brewery working now. Good story with a compelling flavor.

A bullet moving at 2800 feet per second, or roughly Mach 2.5 give or take a little will only move a little bit in 100 yards. The big movements you see that snipers have to plan for is due not only to the wind but the rotation of the earth as well as gravity. Great story otherwise!

The fantasy is fantastic!

John has 4 balls, cum which heals and makes people grow, aliens and spaceships and people are concerned about bullet travel. Smh

Only 2 cum loads into Sparks so far and she is already a 'good girl' ;-) TTFN

So we’ve got aliens, telepathy, FTL, rail guns, tactical lasers and we’re still using bullets and imperial units……. Somehow I get the feeling that further along the line in this story cigars will appear and my Suspension of Disbelief will be permanently broken. Please don’t, I’d really like to believe that the human race can actually get better in the future. Just for the record though, the plot is good, so more plot and a bit less sex would help. Cheers Ppfzz.

Good chapter again.

Wow, just how windy (gale force) can 28th century fans get to? and that shooting range must be huge (extra-long) to allow for significant wind/drift to matter, ... Just wait until ***spoiler alert*** Alyssa can use telekinesis. ;-) TTFN

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"That's amazing" Sparks said in wonder. "So what are you exactly?" she asked him bluntly.

Will Alyssa's theory work for Sparks? Looks like foreshadowing of problems with the "Kintark". And that's quite a dream list John has.

patiently waiting for the yellow N

Yeah, welcome to your new home Sparks, ... when John left to get more of the Tyranium, it was just Alyssa and himself, now they have added Calara and Sparks (tactical and engineering), ... I wonder if they'll add anymore girls on this return leg of their journey, ... ;-) ttfn

To the future, the Ashanath for their fastest (FTL) tachyon drive and a superior Power core, ... the Maliri for powerful Laser weapons, ... the Tarkarans for their super strong (sublight) engines and thrusters, .... the Brimorians for their strong shields, ...

-- and *** spoiler alert *** improved heat sinks from the Kintark, ... and from the Drakkar a new and more powerful 'quantum' way to shoot a ballestic shell, ... then, from the Archnid Queen of the Desolation of Vulkat - Eternity Crystals, plus some info on several High-Tech items from a war that was fought many millenia ago, ... wow, they'll be busy, ... ;-) ttfn

-- fix the spelling oopsies: Trankarans, ... Arachnid Queen, ... and more *** spoiler alert *** also from the Maliri, they get improved sensors, improved targeting system, much improved air filter/purification systems and more, ... largely due to the efforts of the super spy, Dana, ... ;-) ttfn