Three Square Meals Ch. 11

Liking this story a lot hope it keeps going along time yet.

nice story!

I hope for many more chapters. Thanks!

Glad you're enjoying it. I submitted Chapter 12 a couple of days ago, so that should be up soon. Working on Chapter 13 atm.

I've tried to dial down the repetitive sex and add more backstory and character development to the later chapters, let me know what you think.

Where you put this.

Calara kissed him fondly and nodded agreeably. They dressed quickly and turned to check on Sparks one last time before they left, the pale young girl was still sleeping soundly.


That should have been Alyssa Kissing them as they was going to see Calara to eat soon.

Very good story.

Very well done...

Well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.

Thanks for picking up the Calara/Alyssa mistake, hope it wasn't too jarring to the story. I've updated my master document.

Glad to hear you're enjoying it.

Our mission to boldly go where no man has gone before.

So now you have a virgin. Make it so. I like John's possessivness of Sparks, gentile. Gun fights, trading, other races, the Invictive, and their purpose, mind reading, you have some story brewing here. Nice to see ch12.

Thanks for the comment, made me laugh. :)

Still going strong

JC

like it!

Alyssa didn't climax with john this time.

Also will all the girls be able to read John's mind and work in sync as a single unit to make his life constant paradise?

Alyssa's shooting skills

Interesting that she learned how to shoot like that. Hope she gets to use that skill at some point. Would she be able to adjust for multiple crosswinds that go in different directions and/or speeds?

The "GOOD" life

Dreamy and capable women are every man's desire. Can John's life get any better?