Three Square Meals Ch. 12

Still lacking with Calara

Almost the whole time she was sitting at station keeping watch, I really feel it's time to get more developments in her front.

awesome!

I truely enjoy your series and can't wait for more.

Great Story

Thanks much for the story. Look forward to each new chapter.

Tefler....also wanted to say thanks to you for 1) reading the comments, and 2) for commenting on said comments. I think it is great that you do both, as most authors don't bother. Thanks again.

Hooked

I am so hooked on this story. Please keep writing.

More More More More More !!!!!!!!!

Good grief this story can't end yet !.!.!.!.!

Don't worry, I've got no intention of ending the story yet.

One of the advantages of watching countless hours of scifi movies and tv shows, as well as sinking untold numbers of hours into PC gaming is I have a huge source of material to draw from and corrupt! :)

I estimate I've got enough story ideas for at least another 20 chapters, some of which I'm dying to write, but I don't want to rush ahead of myself.

Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far. I'm half way through Chapter 13 at the moment.

Oh and sorry I've been neglecting Calara. There's more on her in the section I'm working on at the moment.

Good story!

I just binge read the whole series. Interesting plot and kinky. The number of stories that have a great plot and boring sex is unfortunate. It is like why bother. There needs to be passion and enthusiasm for what they are doing, which you have here.

The characters could be deeper but all the character development you have done so far has been interesting which makes things far more pleasant to read then infodumping a lot of angst about a character all at the start.

I also like how you avoided some tropes of action genre. "We found the pirates lets not even think about calling the military and instead do it ourselves while we have about 260 million credits of tactically important minerals in our ship." But when it is, "we are smart so we know the military would be happy to do it, but let's do it for Calara!" it transforms the plothole into something that makes perfect sense for the characters.

Captain Tefler: What are your orders sir.

Your building a nice crew captain, are you really going to take them to skirmish some pirates ? You just spanked two of them bare assed I hope you don't become out numbered, it will be some challenge for your young crew.
She was; quite comfortable and not in any danger of suffocating.
When I told her to swallow it will be good for you. The girls I knew just didn't believe me.

Ch 13 submitted

Should be up in a few days!

Can't wait for chapter 13.

Just submitted Chapter 14 too, should be up in a few days once it's been approved.

I deleted a couple of comments that referred to a name mix up in a previous chapter. I appreciated the feedback and now that I've been able to resubmit an edited version to correct those mistakes, I removed the comments so as not to reveal future spoilers for any new readers!

What you're getting here...

...is great background on a story that will blow you away. This chapter (13) and chapter 20 are the LOWEST rated in the entire series (excepting the earliest chapters). And they're still really good. As you (new reader) move forward in the series you'll be amazed that the early chapters had only 15 comments (and think how quaint!). I think you'll discover that not only is Tefler a great story writer, he's a great story teller, by which I mean he knows how to pace the chapters as well as limit the reveal of chapter contents, such that you will keep coming back.

Enjoy the ride!

Alyssa

It'd been nice if you'd have mentioned Alyssa orgasming with John while in another room, when he "feeds" Sparks on pg 2.

It'd be cool if Alyssa climaxed loudly at an inopportune time(like in a delegation, while shopping or in a gun fight) when john is with one of the other girls.

Second to Comment Below.

The comment below that where the story is going will "blow you away" is so true and the reason for my previous reference to it as the Space GOT. The relationships and backgrounds developed here all become so self-fulfilling in the future. 🚀

Enough ideas for how much more?

Remember when you said you had enough ideas for 20 more chapters, Tef? Yeah...you kinda blew past that. Here we are at almost a year after you posted this chapter, and you're now at 67 (soon 68) chapters with no sign of stopping any time soon. The Energizer Bunny's got nothing on you!

Re: Jedi Khan

Yeah, it's a bit surreal reading through the comments, and the early chapters for that matter.

I'm still saying "20 more chapters to go" a year later! :-)

Tefler