And still I find time to get that little catch in my throat when I read your work; I want so much for this story to just keep going and going, it's warmth, and truth, and depth of care is truly a revelation, long may you keep writing, and may all your stories be as warm and human as this. Every woman wishes deep down inside they had a Rod of their own, that special man who makes their world feel safe and sane, I have mine, and I feel blessed, now June and Amy have theirs, may their lives be as warm and safe and wonderful as mine.
Once more a superb play of emotions and romantic effects that produced a stunning and intriguing story. Behan was once more the key ingredient in saving Amy event hough he wasn't even there. Great to see her mom actually coming to her sense despite the trouble they all had to go through to achieve that.
The real moment of salvation came 3 times actually - 1st when June & Rod made love for the first time as it finally gave her the emotional freedom she was searching for; 2nd & 3rd came when Joan gave them her sort-of blessing to pursue their relationship for the foreseeable future. What did take me by surprise, but probably shouldn't, was the decision and determination between June & Amy to share poor Rod (not that he'll be complaining, I hope).
Anyhow, enjoyed it immensely and a great thank you for spotting them so rapidly one after the other. As usual I'd give it a 5*++++!
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Anonymous01/29/16
5*
This story is third time to read for me, I'll still give it five stars.
by
Anonymous04/09/16
Glad to see you got off the roller coaster and started telling a great story. Keep it going, it is really starting to turn into something.
Absolutely fantastic..
Great story..Can't wait to read the next chapter..
so much heartache, so much love
It is good to see them working together to make their troubled relationships work.
great writing.
thanks
Such a very human story
And still I find time to get that little catch in my throat when I read your work; I want so much for this story to just keep going and going, it's warmth, and truth, and depth of care is truly a revelation, long may you keep writing, and may all your stories be as warm and human as this. Every woman wishes deep down inside they had a Rod of their own, that special man who makes their world feel safe and sane, I have mine, and I feel blessed, now June and Amy have theirs, may their lives be as warm and safe and wonderful as mine.
Emotional turmoil at its best
Once more a superb play of emotions and romantic effects that produced a stunning and intriguing story. Behan was once more the key ingredient in saving Amy event hough he wasn't even there. Great to see her mom actually coming to her sense despite the trouble they all had to go through to achieve that.
The real moment of salvation came 3 times actually - 1st when June & Rod made love for the first time as it finally gave her the emotional freedom she was searching for; 2nd & 3rd came when Joan gave them her sort-of blessing to pursue their relationship for the foreseeable future. What did take me by surprise, but probably shouldn't, was the decision and determination between June & Amy to share poor Rod (not that he'll be complaining, I hope).
Anyhow, enjoyed it immensely and a great thank you for spotting them so rapidly one after the other. As usual I'd give it a 5*++++!
5*
This story is third time to read for me, I'll still give it five stars.
Glad to see you got off the roller coaster and started telling a great story. Keep it going, it is really starting to turn into something.
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