Right Under My Nose

No continuity!

College? More like 2nd grade level.
See Jane. See Dick. See Dick's dick.

WTF did I just read?

!!!

There's a reasonable idea in there somewhere, just needs a good story for it.

Good story love the idea!!

gave you a 5 for your talent!!!

Come on

If 2 siblings wrestle nude, sex would make more sense instead of the BS of nude wrestling. I get we all have fantasies but this I wouldn't have written for its that dumb. *

Terrible

Just miserably terrible. *

Pretty lacking

You seriously need an editor or proofreading.

A good start

Now that he fucked his sister, he needs to find a way to fuck his mom.

Perhaps dad will be to drunk when they get home and his mom is horny as hell.

Thanks for the read

Lmao

I clicked on this story expecting something to relive myself over. What I ended up getting was a hilarious incest commedy. The family was morbidly funny and our narrator had some good jokes as well. Not every story has to be a serious love oddesy to be good. If you would have given us more of a back story for the nude wrestling that would have been more believeable. You definitely need to find a good editor and to learn how to use quotes correctly though. Other than that, great job and I hope you keep writing on here. Perhaps a second chapter for this story?

Just couldn't get through the whole thing...Please don't try this again. Life is hard enough.